This is really good and enjoyable. Never really seen an idea like this so that’s why it’s special and fun. Main problems is that the MC is OP, with all caps. He will quickly outgrow the power limit of Rwby and then this story will turn into a wish fulfillment story. Really even with one of his abilities he would still be very OP but the two makes a combination that will break the story, and as said in Spiderverse he will begin to destroy canon events.
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Even if he becomes op, do you think problems that plagued Remnant can only be solved with power alone? Depending on how the author writes this, it could be like a world building sort of fic. Things like racism, weeding out Salem's spies, gearing the defences of humanity etc. The process in which these problems are tackled is what would intrigue us just like a kingdom building novel, not everyone like to read about an mc who struggles at every turn as he steadily get stronger, an op mc does not mean that everything will go his way, look at overlord. The mc was so op but that is what we loved about him, we enjoyed seeing him scheming and using his powers for domination. It all depends on how the author will write the novel. So sometimes reading an OP mc is a change of pace from those beta shounen protagonists.
That’s valid, I personally just don’t enjoy the super op mc trope too much as it ruins the series they’re in. It’s ok if they’re not trying to stick to the plot, but op mcs usually destroy any semblance of the story they were in by dominating it entirely. Idk by changing a fanfic so much with a mega op mc it ruins the story and turns more into an oc story with characters from the series.
