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MashiroSymphony
MashiroSymphonyLv61yr
2023-06-11 00:48

Since there is only one chapter, there really isn't much to say. I read it and it seems nice. The writing quality is great, at least to me it is. I am looking forward for the future development. I was unable to comment in the chapter section, hence why I decided to leave a review. Since there is only one chapter I will give 3 star for everything but the writing quality.

Another Schnee on Remnant

Arokey
4.5
22 Chs

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Dissapointed_One
Dissapointed_OneLv4

Bro, change the review.

1yr
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MashiroSymphony
MashiroSymphonyLv6

I tried to edit it, but was unable to do so. I created another one.

Dissapointed_One:Bro, change the review.
1yr
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I swear guys, it's a canon event so, you can't kill off Jacques even if you wanted to

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This is really good and enjoyable. Never really seen an idea like this so that’s why it’s special and fun. Main problems is that the MC is OP, with all caps. He will quickly outgrow the power limit of Rwby and then this story will turn into a wish fulfillment story. Really even with one of his abilities he would still be very OP but the two makes a combination that will break the story, and as said in Spiderverse he will begin to destroy canon events.

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Chapter 21.Writing Quality: 4It is good. It is readable and sectioned well. I didn't really find it as engaging.Story Development: 3 It was okay. Wynne doing something about the faunus and the community (sorry don't remember what it was called but he worked with Robyn the huntress and her group). The development between him and his older sister and him just teleporting to Beacon and back home was just stale in my perspective.Character Design: 2Wynn got over powered really fast. I don't have a problem with overpowered characters. The other characters don't bring a connection to me in anyway. They just feel like fillers.. I didn't really feel connected with the characters.Update Stability: 3I stopped reading it once I read chapter 21 which was the latest update (25 days ago). At the time, there was a scheduled update. However, since it has been 25 days so far, I lowered the update stability to 3.World Background: 1The world hasn't been explored outside of what was normally mentioned in various other RWBY fanfictions which I assuming the same places are Canon. I have never watched or read the Canon RWBY so I can't give a solid guaranteed score for this. Overall: 2.6Though a low score, I would not say it is a bad novel. I do hope the author writes more and I do look forward for future development. Even if it doesn't improve but stays the same quality, it would be a good read to pass time if you want.Also just because I gave a low score doesn't mean it will be so for you. I think you should read it for yourself and decide whether it is for you or not.

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Kwetzal_Lag
Kwetzal_LagLv5

Guys a canon event has been messed with, Jacques is dead

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Alreth
AlrethLv13

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