The story gets too boring when it shifts its pov's on and Hermione. You should focus more on the powerhouses because they're way more interesting. Perhaps a Grindelwald interaction or another adventure through different magical communities. This story is at its peak during the mc's adventures outside, especially one concerning the ancient wizards. Cliodna is also an interesting character. You should include her more like making arcs concerning her and her background(the druids). Making her the ship to the mc is also an interesting idea, but I think it's better if there is no romance.
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You know like when i was posting OC parts of chapter, many readers were urging me to make the plot fast and show hogwarts plot and i said to them same thing that there will be OC events after every school year ends and in school year the plot will mostly revolve around OG canon with mc's involvement. And the focus will have to sometime shift on our OG trio too as the canon plot revolves around them and its the base for our story.
