Item: Naruto: Self-Evolution
Rating: 5

GodOfLightLv11yr

2023-06-25 04:45

Honestly the quality is shocking for a webnovel fanfic. First off you can see the author has an decent grasp on actual biological functions and puts research and thought into every action. Second the writing quality is great with little to no grammatical errors (and the author is actively fixing the few existing ones) making it easy to read and enjoy. The rest however I cannot fully touch on as there is only 12 chapters as of writing this however if you enjoy logical well thought out stories then I highly recommend you give this Fanfic a shot.

Naruto: Self-Evolution

SharonMeuToba

4.7

29 Chs

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Ayries_JeseaLv4

I read the synopsis and I can tell that you used chatgpt😂Anyway here's a free 5 star for a fellow lazy man.I just hope the contents are not made by an A.I

1yr

zero_mLv1

1yr

Celestial_KaiserLv4

Is it just me or this fic is quite boring? Putting the grammatical mistakes aside, the plot progresion has many flaws. Like awakening of chakra? There is no awakening needed. Kakashi testing the newly enrolled students? There is no testing, they are directly taught and then tested based on the previously taught knowledge, not to mention there is no way kakashi would appear to test the newly entered childern. I think author need to go through naruto plot again before writing new chaps. For now, It may be harsh, but I'll go with 2 star. Edit: So kakashi is a student actually, I misread it. But still there are quite a few plot flaws. So, 3 star.

1yr

Insta_usernameLv2

This fic is real good with balanced edgy protagonist and slice of life or should i say shokogeki no shouma I really like what he does with food. Keep up the good work 👍👍👍

1yr

JerryBeansManLv14

Only Sypnosis with ChatGPT or the rest as well?

1yr

DemiGod_2972Lv4

Sigh, I couldn't read. It's bad. 1. I don't understand why SI fics that show 'God' show him to be a wimp. The MC wanted the 'Skip' button while talking with the God. I can understand you wanting to make it comedic, but it just makes your MC very unrealistic. 2. Meeting with God Gift from God is just a too big of a cheat. But alright considering that it's difficult to survive in Naruto world without any cheat (only seen one fanfic pull it right so far). 3. Having your MC, who doesn't know how to use chakra (or was just taught to use it) fighting equally against Kakashi, a person who was trained by Sakumo, was just too unrealistic. To be honest, I could still read the story despite above things. But I don't understand why you began writing in PoV instead of writing properly? Ruined it entirely for me. 5. Last chapter was 23 days ago. So looks like the author lost interest as well. Not really surprised..I hope that you can plan more before beginning the next fanfic. I understand how difficult it is to write. Anyways, good luck. Though I rated it low, I do see a lot of promise in you. But don't do PoVs.

1yr

SharonMeuTobaAuthor

Im the author soo im giving to my fanfic five star, even after noticing some holes in my plot.

1yr

YardiganLv2

5 star novel so far, it has a lot of potential, just one question, I see the romance tag, and I just wanna confirm that its a single love romance because I don't see the harem tag and a lot of authors do that on purpose knowing that they plan to make a harem novel.

1yr

somberrLv12

I really like the story.If done right it has so much potential.

1yr

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