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Yalatola
YalatolaLv41yr
2023-07-28 02:16

5/5 very good story, i like to see when characters are well exploited, you know what you do and it seen in the development. Evangelyne is very well written, rare to see this kind of aspect

Waltz with Death

ThreyaMidnight
4.8
124 Chs

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ThreyaMidnight
ThreyaMidnightAuthor

thank you so much for reviewing 🥺💕

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Crown_Nyx
Crown_NyxLv13

The story is good and Death is a interesting character. I am not a big fan of FL but this seems fun you should give it a try if you like this genre. The updates are constant and the story is progressing nice.. Overall the book is nice. Keep it up Author!

1yr

Sinadin
SinadinLv3

Good work Author. Nice pacing you have here. The reading experience for me was quite smooth. The plot is great even though it's nowhere near what I read, but I clicked on this, and don't regret it at all. No complaints yet other than the update rate, rest is all good.

1yr
de_writer
de_writerLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Mr_Passek
Mr_PassekLv3

being a lover of FL novels myself i have to say waltz with death is amazing 😍 . whatever it is your doing rn stop and check it out .[img=strong]

1yr
Theothegiant
TheothegiantLv3

Impressive writing so far, the punctations, the writing the story telling all on point! I love how the characters interacts with each other that's one of my favorite aspects when it comes to writing and reading and you pulled it off so well! Keep going!

1yr
ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSkyLv3

Though it’s not really my type of genre but it’s an extremely well written novel. The characters are surprisingly fleshed out despite the lack of chapters. Emotions and situations are described painting a clear picture in the readers head. The grammar is top notch and the word choice is stellar my only nitpick is at times it feels like the story is dragging and over explaining a topic, despite it being relatively simple and that the dialogue at times sounds a bit inorganic

1yr
DragonImmortal
DragonImmortalLv14

Waltz with Death is very well written, with the occasional punctuation error or awkward sentence structure which is rare on Webnovel. As a fellow WN writer, I went ahead and pointed out some areas for writing development for you in the first half of Chapter One before focusing on the story. The use of 1st person narrative as opposed to the 2nd or 3rd person narratives, and present versus past tense, makes it a bit harder for a reader to get wrapped up in the story. Overall, the book has an interesting premise and should only get better with time. It's a nice and unique story that deserves attention.

1yr
MBU_Overlord_6594
MBU_Overlord_6594Lv3

Dope story, excellent concept and it's definitely got me hooked.I can't wait to read more.

1yr
LemArWolf
LemArWolfLv2

Hands down to 1st and 2nd chapter. It got me laughing! Everything is great and well written! She really thinks he was a lost cosplayer and she was like:

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