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2023-08-12 12:09

So first off I am not giving 5 stars for the Stability of Updates because I am purely selfish and want the author to release more than one chapter a day (not realistic I know) but I'm childish and have spent money to read everything to date and it's too good to wait for chapters. *Sorry author you shot yourself in the foot* Next only 4 stars for character design because it is still very early in the novel (less than 100 chapters) and some gaps aren't filled. Maybe it will be as the story progresses or it was intentional but typically by chapter 100 I should have a pretty good idea of what the main character looks like and where they are from. It's a big vague for me and I'm usually great at visualizing but I can't so far. Just IMO. I will note that I typically don't write reviews, post comments, or purchase privilege for most of the things I read on here. *Which is quite ALOT* I only do that for stories I really like or are very unique compared to the numerous ones I've read. However, I have done this for this novel. Would I recommend it to others? Yes, if it stays on its projected trajectory. I like where it seems to be going, I just wish there was more to read. Would I spend more money? Yes... but please give more reasons to! I am voracious at reading. (I mean I inhale written works) So I hope that chapters become longer or the amount of updates increases. Again for selfish reasons ...

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Devilbesideyou666
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Hi! Thank you so much for your review!!! I thought I had been posting two chapters a day!!! I am so sorry about that! I will definitely fix that in the future!!I am so grateful that you have purchased privilege! Unfortunately, because this is my first month being able to offer it, WN limits me to only 2 chapters. However, I am frantically writing to be able to provide up to 50 chapters the first of next month (and then every month there after).I will work hard to make sure that you can visualize our girl. If you have Instagram, you can follow me on that. I've posted pictures of pretty much everyone! I will try to support your voracious appetite for the novel! (And I do have two others you can check out, too!)Once again, thank you so much for your support! It really means the world to me!

Aiore
AioreLv15

Thx for replying, Wasn’t expectating that. No worries it was my two cents but in the end it’s your universe. Appreciate all the effort! Will continue to support!

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