resivision, I have read 720 chapters of the crude novel, and it is a story of slow progression, which helps the narrative to make sense of both the growth of the mc and his companions, the powers obtained are not crazy or out of context, the objectives They are achieved based on planning and taking advantage of enemy weaknesses, the personalities of the characters in the series are preserved quite well and it does not have the classic Chinese references (the author hardly used them in the novel) ps: it is the best Chinese novel ( from naruto) that I read, because each arc was interesting and maintained a certain coherence throughout the series❤️❤️❤️

Meh. It's just boring. The dialogues felt forced, and characters just don't act real.

Translation prity nice ( 4.5★). But the story itself is bs and boring. And Mr. Translators keep it up. I didn’t read many chapters but your translation nice.

i don't expect this but this is actually good, im not a fan of harem, or you can say i hate harem, but this novel don't make me hate it, maybe because he doing it good, and not rushed it, or maybe he mc don't have a brain full of sperm, the mc power up also very good, not op but op i don't want to explain it, its too long loland i have an advice for u author or translator, maybe you should change the cover to atrack more reader.

La historia es muy interesante, el MC no es un dios todoterreno ni un elegido invencible, el no tiene linajes op ni técnicas divinas, tampoco un sistema roto, al darse cuenta de que está en una organización de lavado de cerebro llena de súper humanos entrenados desde los tres años para matar, decidió que quería escapar de esa organización terrorista, un decisión inteligente si debo decir, con el tiempo hizo amigos e incluso una pareja, pero al entender que no podía lograr su objetivo en Konoha, decidió seguir su plan original, escapar de konoha, con todo lo utilizable que pueda llevar, spoiler, podemos decir que la muerte de su maestro fue el clavo en el ataúd, si sakumo se convirtiera en Hokage, habría Sido facil para el haber que shiraishi se quede en konoha, el carisma de sakumo era masivo, incluso podía afectar a sus tres discípulos particulares, tanto ruri como Ayane, tenían problemas fáciles de tratar, el discípulo del hokage no puede ser un esclavo, y ruri no tenía problemas particulares, convencer a shiraishi de quedarse y lograr sus cambios en konoha no habría Sido difícil para sakumo, al final el resultado se debe a hiruzen y danzó, supongo que por su culpa es que sucede todo.

the story is great, the plot is very well handled. but so many things weren't utilized well, and man killing some of the characters just because the mc didn't want to be strong himself is rather infuriating for me. I'm sorry I Cant accept such a weak and stupid MC. This was really one of the few fanfics i liked, but the author to escalate the conflict simply did something that i don't get and more importantly, the mc got more and more infuriating as time passed.

This work is very interesting, in general I liked it, there was only one thing bothering me about this work, which is that the protagonist literally has the shadow clone, perfect for him who is a scientist/doctor and has a lack of time for experiments/studies, and he still So don't use the shadow clone, this is incredibly annoying, he could use it from the gym to either send the clone to the gym in his place or leave the clone at home studying for him, from the beginning it takes work he could do that (when he he won Ruri's shadow clone he had the chakra to make at least 1 clone) - this is my main problem with this work, not using the potential of the shadow clone, which the protagonist should have realized since he gained the jutsu, (seeing that he is a "genius")

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Solid story development (I just finished volume1), one of the best narotu fanfictions I've read, the only problem I have with it is that the paceing is slow. The update stability is ok (sometimes there are capters every day sometimes one chaper every few days). Would recomend 9/10

Very good story, please continue with the translation / adaptation of this story [img=recommend] [img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket]