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2023-07-28 17:14

A nice story. Very believable characters and I look forward to the new songs. Smooth good rhythm in storytelling and believable dialogue.Excellent world building and character development.- The story has a lot of potential. Will definitely be in my library and I enjoyed this story very much.

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