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cheesekaikLv31yr
2023-08-06 12:28

Great start! This book reminded me of the mesmerizing ghost doctor, which is really good because i loved that book. I love how this book empowers women And i really liked where the story is going, and cannot wait to see the MC rise to top again after falling.

The good for nothing little miss

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Ashente
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Currently on chapter 22. I'll stop here to give my impressions. First of all, I'm not really in the habit of reading novels with LFs because I find them too mushy and without any real thrill. However, this novel changed my vision. I like the way LF breaks the stereotypes of a young girl in danger waiting for charming men to help her. The universe is quite well constructed and the story really takes an intriguing turn. It's weak to strong but at the same time overpowered, just the way I like it. I highly recommend this novel. Keep going on author-san 🙏

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Hiddensoul_7
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Really love the book, i just started to read this and i really love the novel the novel have a good flow ✨👍

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TheOtherNoble
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There are a lot of good ideas here. The characters are well thought out and it’s clear a lot of effort is put into the writing. The creatures and people are interesting and the story seems like it has a clear goal. Keep up the good work, Author!

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SilverSkyla
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what a great plot, the synopsis is really good I really want to try out this novel

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FightLoveSystem
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Great story line with great characters. With a bit of touch to grammar I believe it can be the one of the best I have read with FL mc.

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Hanand_Giri
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The Novel is amazing. If you could just ignore some very minor grammatical mistakes, the english is not bad. The characters are colourful, their every action is reasonable. The world background is interesting and even the Fl's past. While the minor villains are cliche, they are very negligible. The constant updates is like a cherry in the pie. Very yummy. All in all, this is a must read book.

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Goddess1ofchaos
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I want to follow Su Yunluo in her journey to become stronger. The story is so captivating that am seriously waiting to see how it unfolds. Keep up the good work author take us deeper to a world of fantasy romance.

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Author_of_Fate
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The story proposes some interesting concepts, but has yet to develop to the point where they can be fully explored. Beyond a few fairly standard plotlines, such as a secret god contract and unique system, I find the main characters relationships with her family very endearing. Keep up the good work, author!

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A simplistic yet impressive work of art. The plot progression is extremely neat and the pacing is decent. Hope that you continue and carry on with your future works. I'd love to see how the story unfolds.

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