Review Detail of The_Little_Hero in In The Heaven We Trust
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Hello Everybody, Author is here!First I will like to take advantage of the shameless author right and give myself a 5 star rating review.Now a few things about this novel.First this novel is about cultivation, but it's not normal cultivation where heroes focus on fighting and stealing resources like a bandit. No this stories will take an interest in an realistic view about cultivation and how it can affect the society.Things to consider are logic, dangers, social status, consequences, schemes, worshipping benefits, cruel laws of the nature, fear of the competition, suppressing the competition, taking advantage of the weak, dispose of the evidence and many others that will give you a profound logical view on realistic cultivation. The nature of cultivation itself is merciless as there is not any limit to it. In this infinite level hierarchy and each higher level is equivalent to the death of all the levels below it with the snap of a finger, this will amplify the cruel realism of cultivation, and how you desperately need to always be at the top and hold the red button for the lower levels.Sorry if my grammar is average at best, I'm not a native and I may need to edit the bad grammer. I'm also a beginner so if I make a mistake with the plot or in words in some parts I may need to edit it along with the grammer.I will try to update it as frequent as possible but I can't give you any promises. There's many problems to this as I have to work so my time is limited, I also have other activities as well and I need to think of a plot that somewhat matches the intelligence of these scheming monstrosities that lived for thousands sometime millions of years. Every single one of them can generate billions of thoughts in a second. I can't keep up with it using only my average level intelligence, so I may need more time when thinking of their strategies.Other than that I hope you enjoy the story.
In The Heaven We Trust
The_Little_Hero
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True, I downloaded Grammarly and I can see that the words are becoming cleaner, this will make it easier to edit my chapters and get rid of unnecessary words, thanks and enjoy the story.
Swiftescape:Use grammarly and chatgpt to help you with grammar
Just_Franck09:I love evil mc, really I do. But this story and so many out there are generic copy of Reverend insanity, not to mention they’re boring and uninspiring.
Hey man, I appreciate that you took your time reading my story. Now for your claims, I'd love to see some of these 'copies' of Reverend Insanity that you claim there are because if something out there can be considered a copy it means that it needs to be somewhat good to even compare them slightly, especially to a master piece like Reverend Insanity. The only one that has such rights is Warlock Of The Magus World, basically by your words you know a lot of stories on that level which honestly I'd love to read, wo why not give me some examples. Also you critiqued the novel when I haven't finished rhe first volume, can you tell me what about it is generic, it's a evil world that interlocks with evil politics and power, there are many people who may want power and their common sense will dictate them to do evil, it's nothing generic but a natural reaction. Naturally I love to do a novel about an evil world, this is yhe ature of this world. Going by you arguments you implement that im coping the idea of Reverend Insanity of evil world. Do you know how this logic works? It's the same as critiquing painters of painting things life sub, forest, moon, etc. Making an evil world in a story is the same and going by your logic Warlock Of The Magus World which has similar nature to Reverend Insanity also copies it. Don't forget that in terms of writing ideas are mostly worthless, its execution that works, and even then there are very few stories with similar ideas to an proper evil mc like Fang Yuan and proper evil world like the gu world where benefits are essential. One more thing if you want to critique me of bad writing at least try to come with your story and idea and make it great yourself, put in the work before the complaint. I saw that you have a novel as well but gave up on it. Rather than critiquing me isn't it better to invest your time on developing your work.
Just_Franck09:Simply put author your not a good writer.