Note that what I said here is not always the truth. If Chang Luo Chen is so incompetent that he needs plot armor to have his life saved, I won't save him, if his sacrifice at the final destination makes things more interesting I might sacrifice him. The truth isn't always stepped in stone.

I agree, I didn't take this novel to seriously back then so later when I'm ending the volume 1 I will fix some of these plotholes. There are also some mistakes in powerscaling towards chapter 20 that I will fix later on.

the matter between Luo Chen and Emperor Of Heaven is about mutual benefits, plus the Emperor can also have other targets than Luo Chen, if he is too weak and can't solve his tribulations he will be abandoned, not saved, both the Emperor Of Heaven and The Administrator will do the same thing.

thanks man for the appreciated review. I will try to balance my work time and update it more frequently these days, but it's still somewhat difficult, so keep reading and enjoy the new chapters soon, it will take a while before it reaches the climax of the first volume and Luo Chen becomes a true demon but it will be worth it. You will be shocked by how savage some things can get.

Hey man, I appreciate that you took your time reading my story. Now for your claims, I'd love to see some of these 'copies' of Reverend Insanity that you claim there are because if something out there can be considered a copy it means that it needs to be somewhat good to even compare them slightly, especially to a master piece like Reverend Insanity. The only one that has such rights is Warlock Of The Magus World, basically by your words you know a lot of stories on that level which honestly I'd love to read, wo why not give me some examples. Also you critiqued the novel when I haven't finished rhe first volume, can you tell me what about it is generic, it's a evil world that interlocks with evil politics and power, there are many people who may want power and their common sense will dictate them to do evil, it's nothing generic but a natural reaction. Naturally I love to do a novel about an evil world, this is yhe ature of this world. Going by you arguments you implement that im coping the idea of Reverend Insanity of evil world. Do you know how this logic works? It's the same as critiquing painters of painting things life sub, forest, moon, etc. Making an evil world in a story is the same and going by your logic Warlock Of The Magus World which has similar nature to Reverend Insanity also copies it. Don't forget that in terms of writing ideas are mostly worthless, its execution that works, and even then there are very few stories with similar ideas to an proper evil mc like Fang Yuan and proper evil world like the gu world where benefits are essential. One more thing if you want to critique me of bad writing at least try to come with your story and idea and make it great yourself, put in the work before the complaint. I saw that you have a novel as well but gave up on it. Rather than critiquing me isn't it better to invest your time on developing your work.

Legendary novel from author with legendary reputation. Character, conflicts, worldbuilding philosophy are all amazing. I definitely have high expectations from you given your role model (Great Love Immortal Venerable) and I'm pretty sure you'll deliver, good luck with the future of your novel and hope you don't drop it for any pointless reason.

This is what we call a high level grooming tehnique

MasterPiece compared to the webnovel standard, so a 5 star review from me. MC is a real powerful veteran, who will do anything to achieve his dream. He has opportunities, and a strong ability that will allow him to achieve numerous evolutionary possibilities, among those there are other inspirations on how to use these abilities based on other fictional works. His enemies are insanely OP as well with their magic that can let them reach God level, also many abilities and haxes, which could put immense pressure on the mc. The cosmology is also different from our own, giving it an air of mystery towards what adventure and adversity will he face when he will leave the safety of his planet and adventure on this endless abyss called the universe. One with different laws of physics and logic than our own.

The Administrator -> In The Heaven We Trust

TLDR: no romance, no harem for mc.Well, there is a girl, and her name is immortality.She also has many usses, like helping the Man enjoy his life forever, letting him achieve his goale, letting him explore life and all of its misteries without the nuisence of mortality and lack of times, it c*ckblocks bullshit philosophy such as 'life has no meaning If its eternal' ore 'only death can show You the worth of life' my friend, what, like really what?Only dopamine and intelligence can show you the worth of life, not death, death only takes the fun of life from you.The best benefit is that is a part of your body, exactly like your limbs, so no pointless drama either, see, a true girl.Wait, by romance, do you mean like a physical one with the opposite sex, like a man and a women? What is that recipe, can it be eaten with onions?For a serios answer, no there is no romance and no mid-rem(harem) for the mc, and i'll think about the romance for the secondary characters, even this will be unlickely, and If there is, it will be minimal with a few references and pharagraphs at most.

True, I downloaded Grammarly and I can see that the words are becoming cleaner, this will make it easier to edit my chapters and get rid of unnecessary words, thanks and enjoy the story.

Randy Orton : First time?

You're mother had a different opinion, sir.

No mister, I'm not, I'm just waiting here for your mommy.

This is indeed a great story for a wn.The details and the explanations of the events that happen in the story is very rich , even for small ones like talking about their facial features during a competition, or details and description about the city.The world building is pretty good too.The war between races, the way that the greed for power sway the living and portrays a logical view of the world where power will corrupt everything, this will make a clear difference compared to a world where things move around without meaning. This will show the natural flaw within sentient things, and the brutality expressed by a logical and intelligent being who will use any method no matter how cruel to achieve their desire for absolute supremacy.The development of characters Is excellent as well. They are fitting will with their description.Azazel is stubborn, naive and has a moral sense for justice or atleast respects ethics given that he was raised properly.The other characters are ambitions as well and not monotone, their experiences about the world talks as well.Overall this story is a 5/5

Hello Everybody, Author is here!First I will like to take advantage of the shameless author right and give myself a 5 star rating review.Now a few things about this novel.First this novel is about cultivation, but it's not normal cultivation where heroes focus on fighting and stealing resources like a bandit. No this stories will take an interest in an realistic view about cultivation and how it can affect the society.Things to consider are logic, dangers, social status, consequences, schemes, worshipping benefits, cruel laws of the nature, fear of the competition, suppressing the competition, taking advantage of the weak, dispose of the evidence and many others that will give you a profound logical view on realistic cultivation. The nature of cultivation itself is merciless as there is not any limit to it. In this infinite level hierarchy and each higher level is equivalent to the death of all the levels below it with the snap of a finger, this will amplify the cruel realism of cultivation, and how you desperately need to always be at the top and hold the red button for the lower levels.Sorry if my grammar is average at best, I'm not a native and I may need to edit the bad grammer. I'm also a beginner so if I make a mistake with the plot or in words in some parts I may need to edit it along with the grammer.I will try to update it as frequent as possible but I can't give you any promises. There's many problems to this as I have to work so my time is limited, I also have other activities as well and I need to think of a plot that somewhat matches the intelligence of these scheming monstrosities that lived for thousands sometime millions of years. Every single one of them can generate billions of thoughts in a second. I can't keep up with it using only my average level intelligence, so I may need more time when thinking of their strategies.Other than that I hope you enjoy the story.

AWESOME STORY JOKER, Very interesting mc that makes his decisions on realism and logic, uses his advantage of future knowledge to get more benefits. True to the naruto world, a brutal world where the weak fodder ninja dies so he makes plans to survive that as any other logical person should do. Naruto world is true to itself, you literally can't differentiate between this and original, as the characters are true to themselves and they're personalities. This is a breath of fresh air compared to other stories here who are boring, have bs nerfed characters, forced plot or plot armor, there is nothing of that here. Keep it going to your other stories as well[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]