Review Detail of Booklovingwriter in The Orb of Worlds without Limits: Alice in Borderland

I'm glad to hear that, initially if I consider my other stories I haven't had good grammar, but it's nice to know that my efforts have resulted in better things. I hope you like the story, and thank you very much for lert.

I read your walking dead fanfic(20 chapters) and have to say that you have improved a lot. The dialogue is still iffy, but its still much better. Maybe to help with the dialogue you should read the dialogue out loud, and if it sounds weird when you say it out loud, change it.