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It starts realy good but the first thing that bothers me is the style you write in it dosen´t fell like a human wrote it and more like it is AI written (just a feeling with the Dialogs and the Narrator). Even then I don´t rly mind as long as the story is good but I kinda don´t understand why Sasuke would revive the Uchia Clan in the World of DxD or how he would get the idea to do that in the first place but i think it´s not rly a good move more like it seems unnecessary he could have just lived his life there and build a new family with Yasaka like he startet his new family in Boruto Series. Further more I don´t rly like the paste the story is progressing in it feels like a bit of rushing and the emotianal bonding that should happen in a story that wants to be emotianal with the relationship between Sasuke and Yasaka feels forced and too fast progressing. I will still read the Story for a bit to see where you will go with the revived family but currently I am more on the side of dropping it.

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