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  • Veber
    Veber1mth
    Commented

    I Love how he dosen‘t care and Upload the next one ^^

    Ch 32 Chapter 32: Malcolm
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    DxD: Lelouch Vi britannia Return In Ero world As a Black Knight
    Anime & Comics · vilan864
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  • Veber
    Veber1mth
    Posted

    I love this so far *-*. Hope to see how this progresses in the future. Pls try not to drop this!!

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    DxD: Lelouch Vi britannia Return In Ero world As a Black Knight
    Anime & Comics · vilan864
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  • Veber
    Veber2mth
    Replied to LuciusAgares

    agree with you, he should not have random abilitys from other worlds too but maybe learn some from this world would be better.

    A/N: the mc doesn't just have Excalibur and the dragon factor, he has other powers and skills from other random anime I've watched, which I'll slowly reveal on various different chapters.
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    Princess and her knight(Overlord AU)
    Anime & Comics · Xinum_Sensational
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  • Veber
    Veber4mth
    Replied to sybife

    Is this your original fanfic or translated?

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    Naruto : Uchiha Clan
    Anime & Comics · sybife
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  • Veber
    Veber8mth
    Commented

    Reupload?

    Ch 1 Chapter One: Nuances
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    The Soul Reaping Overlord (Overlord X Bleach)
    Anime & Comics · Triple_Sweet
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  • Veber
    Veber8mth
    Replied to Failure_Number9

    He can go super saiyajin and shoot a kamehameha out of his mouth xD

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    One Piece: The Demon of Fire
    Anime & Comics · GodaSensei
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  • Veber
    Veber8mth
    Replied to _Ismael_

    Maybe perfection of form combined with strength and the ability to peform it in any situation?

    I unlocked one of Yamamoto's signature punches; Ikkotsu.
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    Naruto: Reduce All Creation to Ash
    Anime & Comics · Palpable_Banana
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  • Veber
    Veber8mth
    Posted

    Well with what I read so far I can say that this is a good idea with potential but sadly the Author can´t get to touch upon it. The writing Quality is not good with a lot of mistakes. Some plot points are weird like the age of the protagonist and so on. Furthermore I think the part that he has a System with the potential to unlock his power just by leveling it is never rly that apealing because you can just bulls*it it and decide how strong he is at whatever point. I also don´t like his name and how he gets to know the charakters of the JJK World, it feels lackluster and more like "Well I wantet you guys to know that they exist". I was realy looking forward to reading this but the quality of this story just feels like a Chinese webnovel and with this I sadly will not continue. I still wish the Author the best of luck for the future.

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  • Veber
    Veber8mth
    Commented

    Why Thaddeus :D? He is in Japan right? :D

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  • Veber
    Veber8mth
    Commented

    depends if Yamamoto is the old mann or not. If yes then no.

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  • Veber
    Veber8mth
    Commented

    O.o

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  • Veber
    Veber9mth
    Posted

    It starts realy good but the first thing that bothers me is the style you write in it dosen´t fell like a human wrote it and more like it is AI written (just a feeling with the Dialogs and the Narrator). Even then I don´t rly mind as long as the story is good but I kinda don´t understand why Sasuke would revive the Uchia Clan in the World of DxD or how he would get the idea to do that in the first place but i think it´s not rly a good move more like it seems unnecessary he could have just lived his life there and build a new family with Yasaka like he startet his new family in Boruto Series. Further more I don´t rly like the paste the story is progressing in it feels like a bit of rushing and the emotianal bonding that should happen in a story that wants to be emotianal with the relationship between Sasuke and Yasaka feels forced and too fast progressing. I will still read the Story for a bit to see where you will go with the revived family but currently I am more on the side of dropping it.

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    DxD: The Uchiha Family
    Anime & Comics · NovaCloud
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  • Veber
    Veber9mth
    Commented

    it would be nice if you stopped starting every sentence with Aizen try more sentence building

    Ch 2 The Fire Temple
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    The Transmigration of Aizen Sōsuke
    Anime & Comics · moonmirror
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  • Veber
    Veber9mth
    Commented

    +1

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  • Veber
    Veber10mth
    Commented

    I would say dont let her switch the deck but just upgrade it konstantly.

    Before we begin, I'm wondering how do you guys feel seeing Divine Dragon Lord Felgrand as Yuna's trump card, like Yugi with dark magician and Kaiba with BEWD? I will implement other decks in this story but Divine Dragon Lord Felgrand will be her main.
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    YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!
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  • Veber
    Veber11mth
    Commented

    Kinda dumb that someone who is sacrificing himself for his clan would tell that to a child to plant hatred. I read something similar in another FF and also tought that it is stupid to go to a 4 year old child and say "I trust you that you will protect my child that is btw older than you" and "I feel this blind child will be someone strong with gut feeling alone". It´s not like there are fairytails in Naruto where that happend so were does he get this trust in him? It feels like a stupid way to motivate him.

    Ch 9 Ch-9 The Unexpected Visitor
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    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • Veber
    Veber11mth
    Commented

    Well at least it will only take 18 years to get 100%, so good trade off! :D

    {Template: Issho, Fujitora (0.015%)}
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    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • Veber
    Veber11mth
    Commented

    How about a weapon created from a divne beast with the concept of death. That would make the weapon able to kill gods because the concept of death is stronger than the divinity of gods which would be able to kill the soul of a god. So he would be able to kill gods witout being someone who can destroy the soul of a god himself. And because he killed the divine beast you could make the MC a half-god and give him some ability that enhances him in eather the body so he gets a strong body (like Hercules) or his magic becomes refined with a touch of divinity. This will depend on the route you want to go with the MC if more magic oriented or phisical. As a weapon he could wieald a Great-sword or something smaler like a Rapier up to you.

    Requirements: Number of concepts - 1 (concepts like: unrecognizable, instant death, etc. are immediately rejected).
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    Fate : A New Legend(Abandoned)
    Anime & Comics · Ased
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  • Veber
    Veber11mth
    Commented

    SO far the story feels like a journal and not rly what i search for. The idea is also good but to be honest this feels not like Zeref reincarnated but more like someone who admired him and took his toughts.

    Ch 3 The Trials of Courage
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    The story of Zelef Dragnir's reincarnation
    Anime & Comics · realdu_31302
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  • Veber
    Veber11mth
    Commented

    Ravenclaw.

    After the welcoming formalities, the students were assigned to one of the four Hogwarts houses: Gryffindor, Slytherin, Hufflepuff or Slytherin. Zachary held his breath as his name was called.
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    The story of Zelef Dragnir's reincarnation
    Anime & Comics · realdu_31302
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