Review Detail of XP_HAVOK in Pokemon: A life worth living

the story is a wonderful slice of life with how he goes about doing things the only things I don't like is the massive amount of subtle romance were your gonna end up with half the chapters being more romance stuff instead of furthering the story as that takes away from the main character alot as stories like these the focus ends up being the love interest and the plot line where you can't flesh out the pokemon, the world, how things work, ect. it just becomes about the love interest and secondly I remember in the beginning you were saying you wanted a much more balanced and realistic story yet the main character is someone with insane levels of luck and a lot of people are very naive and gullible like incredibly so same with the pokemon there is a few times you show the intelligence of one here one there but you almost never flush out the character and just keep adding more and more pokemon. also the strength scale is definitely wrong at this level by 300 chapters he's gonna have champion level pokemon who were mostly self trained.