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PtitkactusLv131yr
2023-08-14 00:21

Character and story development is pretty much dead on the mc part outside of having 100 pokemons that don't do much.

Pokemon: A life worth living

Nuclide
4.7
116 Chs

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Nuclide
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Caution, spoilers for the latest chapters ahead!!I mean, the MC became a celebrated researcher and recipe book author. He proposed to his longtime girlfriend, who only recently fulfilled her longtime goal of becoming a gym leader, while Courtney, the helper he has working on his farm, entered a relationship. He reaffirmed his familial relationship with Elm's family that grew over the two earth years he spent in the world.Then there are legendary pokemon giving him missions, him interacting with important league personell like professors, gym leaders, and champions all the while this is a slice of life novel, not an action packed thriller.What more character development could I do? How much more action needs to happen in a slice of life novel? Or do you not consider what I wrote as development and simply stuff that happens to him? 🤔

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R0berto
R0bertoLv13

I think he wants this kind of development. hahahah

Nuclide:Caution, spoilers for the latest chapters ahead!!I mean, the MC became a celebrated researcher and recipe book author. He proposed to his longtime girlfriend, who only recently fulfilled her longtime goal of becoming a gym leader, while Courtney, the helper he has working on his farm, entered a relationship. He reaffirmed his familial relationship with Elm's family that grew over the two earth years he spent in the world.Then there are legendary pokemon giving him missions, him interacting with important league personell like professors, gym leaders, and champions all the while this is a slice of life novel, not an action packed thriller.What more character development could I do? How much more action needs to happen in a slice of life novel? Or do you not consider what I wrote as development and simply stuff that happens to him? 🤔
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Yes!! I find another pokemon fanfic‚ and I like the synopsis‚ and of course I hope the Waifu is Mommy Cynthia! ❤️

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Awesome story and while making the pokemon world super realistic, it's not like those other super edgy fanfics that are just plain depressing to read

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stads
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is an interesting start of a pokemon story with the nice twist of not trying to to be a trainer of the next champion but relaxing farm life in the pokemon world with the challenges that would bring. char development if at a steady pace and not to many characters thrown in. fun choice of pokemon moving away from the pike clone's

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lovely story so far, really enjoying the interactions between the characters

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Maxel17
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I’m not one to write a review but this fic is well deserving of it. The slice of life living in Pokémon is captivating and just all around fun. P.S (author: my favorite Pokémon is Absol just though I’d stick that in there)

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TinyBookDragon
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I only have one critique. You describe smiles as "warm" near constantly. Everyone, person or pokemon, gives "warm smiles". Why? Why is that repeated so much that I'm losing my mind every time it appears? There are a variety of ways to describe smiles or even better, they don't need to be mentioned that much in the first place. Loving the story other than that.

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Nuclide
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pretty good story, brah keep it up, dude haha jk, this story is doodoo ...unless😳

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Orre03
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It's been a while since I first read this fic, but I really liked it upon my second (oki maybe third) read. I just really enjoy chill pokemon fics. [img=Loving it]

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