I dropped at chapter 7 due to the huge info dump, it was 7 whole chapters of info dump with no sign of stopping. I really tried to give this fic a chance, but I couldn't take it. My recommendation to the author is to avoid big info dumps in the future and present this kind of thing during the story with the characters learning what's going on and about the past at relevant moments rather than hitting the readers with so much info dump before the story even begins.
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Thank you for your advice. I thought that by describing the development of the character in this way, it would be more enjoyable to read about his future actions. However, I realise that I am keeping it longer than necessary, and it can become boring. For this reason, I published and finished the parts related to development within a week. I agree with you, I will pay extra attention to this in my next novel. If you wish, you can continue reading from the second part. I mentioned this in the synopsis of the novel. Thank you for your review.
