Review Detail of Golias in Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System
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The development is generic, but it's possible to handle it, the biggest problem is that out of 19 chapters read, 99% of the content is narration, it's not for me.
Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System
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honestly, I don't even remember the content of it, but there is a lot of dialogue in HP, I don't know what you're talking about, dialogue with the Dursleys, dialogue with Hagrid, dialogue in Diagon Alley, dialogue on the train, dialogue in the selection and etc... from what I remember reading here, most of the dialogue was deleted in favor of a narrative summary, not that it matters to me anymore now, after all I don't remember that story.
Dioscaido12:But HP is a Narrative novel xd lit. is Short in the begining but in the end is very very extended xdimage
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