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2023-10-02 08:01

after more than a month of withdrawal and reflection, it is with sadness that I stop this novel, the basic idea was great, but the arrival of "a certain supernatural being breaks everything, the story becomes completely different thing and loses his coolness. I love the character in question and I would have loved a novel about him as a reincarnated person, but no. and it's the same for the story that was launched after... I won't say more but it's a big waste for me Writing Quality *** (5 start story) Stability of Updates *** Story Development * (5 start story) Character Design * (5 start story) World Background ***

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hunterxxhunter2011
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Give me more specifics, because honestly I pretty much lost my zeal for this story as well. It felt like I went too far off course on my original idea, so tell me how you really feel, specifically and it might help me clarify my own thoughts.

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