3.8, while there's only 13 chaps, lets see: Writing, so-so, there are few issue in the few first chap like grammar, capitalization, read flow. However, these issue lessened by the next chap. that's good job done well. (U might want to edit and polish 1-3 chap tho, these are golden chaps!) Updates, great job, keep that a chap a day update! Story, nothing much can be concluded rn, butttt i wish the plot arent that so much serious, i cant find something to tickle me and laugh in these 13 chaps, all were in serious mood! i kinda need soomething to balance it off. Character, this is almost down bad, just saying about the character's name is boring, something must be done about it. I knew this wont be an easy feat considering almost the entire availbe chaps were all in serious mood, but im sure a balance between this and the plot is also important, Overall, okay-ish, its too early to come into a conclusion, hope that will be more complex layer to the story like romance, friendship, mentorship, etc to be woven, cuz right now, it cant see it happen (in these early chaps tho), cheeers!

As a big fan of swords, I have to say... THIS BOOK IS AMAZING!!! The plot is going on well, MC is a good one but Mr Author San... Please update more or you shall find Pennywise in your bedroom at 11:00pm

15 Chapters in, and the tale is quite interesting in its beginning. The passages are written in an easily understood manner and one gets a very, very clear POV out of the main character, Ruel. There are a few moments where it can be difficult to parse the dialogue, but nothing a good round of editing won't clear up. The best parts of the story so far are the action scenes, which are a lot more than I expected for the beginnings of a story. Without going into spoilers, I'll just say: Overall a fun read.