Review Detail of AzurSky in Honkai Diary : Start from Raising a White Fluffball (On Hold)

Hello AzurSky here! I'm just translating this novel. I want to try to write my own fanfiction but i decided to learn how to write one first by translating it first (altho i'm getting some help from a machine T^T) and then look more closely how a novel that's easy to read is written. I hope you guys enjoy the story!