Writing - Good but there are several grammatical error and stuff Story - good for now Character - good Update stability - decent World bg - interesting mix Overall this have potential, keep it up!!

whats up?

I put the link on the synopsis!

Hmm... strong enough to beat honkai beast with just her fist i think? at least I think they can fight a herrscher alone for a period of time

Thanks, you're making me embarassed lol I don't do much. Don't worry I'm not forcing myself, I want to read this fanfic with ease too after all.

I'm going to. Thank you in advance for the stones~

and I did. Thank you for the praise!

Thank you for the praise! Ah that one.. I have seen the fanfic but I haven't read it yet because female mc aren't my cup of tea. If you praise it that much then I will try to read at least 30 chapters first. Thank you for the recommendation!

its a machine translation of cn fanfic to be exact or MTL for short

I would be grateful if you still decided to give me any tho~

Hello AzurSky here!! First I want to clear things up, THIS IS A MTL. I only did small editing before posting it here. The editing was done so I can read it myself with comfort so don't thank me! I'm only uploading it here so more people will love this story especially since there are not that many good hi3rd fanfic here. If you want to read it in advance you can go to the link in the description. Oh and don't give me that power stone you hear me?! I'm only doing machine translate for this. It would be different if I decided to write one on my own tho so give me power stone when the time comes~~

First of all I'm sorry for the mtl i posted of your.. i believe your favourite fanfic? I'm really sorry for that Oh and idk why but it looks like the word di*k remove your review from the page automatically even tho i still receive it on my inbox and it won't allow me to pin or highlight your review. At first i was doing mtl and editing some words for my personal use so i can read it more comfortably on my phone. I really like the fanfic tho thats why i want to share it here so more people can enjoy it. No need to appreciate my time since i only copy paste the text that i edit for my own reading into webnovel. I have put the link on the description and made an announcement to clear things up that this is only a mtl. Oh! and I also list out how i did it in case people want to read it by themselves but they don't know how. You can read it in detail on the latest chapter about that.. I'm really sorry for what I did and thank you for the wake-up call !!

whoops my bad i will fix it now

until further notice where sin mal is described with short hair i would like to think of her looking like this

yeahh for now his power comes from his machinery

if i remember correctly yun che died near the start no? unless you mean the one at the other continent

Writing quality - good except there are some typo or even misused words. Nothing to say about the stability of updates. Story development - no point writing a fanfic if it follows the OG too much, author is blaming it on some kind of ancient god fixing the plot, sounds like lazy writing to me. Character Design - nothing special World Background - author messed up the power system/grading. Skipping realms to fight is something common especially with several of maxed out super strong abilities.

mafuyu ftw but if i might suggest someone, how abt tachibana hina from domestic kanojo as well??? integrating domekano world seems interesting

yeah the artist of the cover

good sir may i know the credit for this novel cover picture at the moment??