I hope you author don't put fckd up things again in this fic like your previous ones, please be normal.... I'll edit this review if it's good
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LIKEJustin_Richardsn:he did not kill EVERYONE and think he took that route cause of the aliens in the series and he wanted to add them, that is a thing aliens would do most of the times especially in that kinda of world
AspiringPedo:Good luck with that, you know it’s gonna be a waste of time considering the reviews on ALL of his other fanfics. It’s not even funny anymore this guy is beyond saving💀
Not all of his fiction is bad, but he has a history of writing exceptionally stupid protagonists/plots or frustrating plots like a protagonist's sister falling in love with and marrying one of her rapists and the MC accepting it. On the other hand he also has some really good fics and the author always completes his work, no matter how bad it is and how harsh the reviews so I recommend giving it a chance since it's rare to find a fic that you know is going to be finished . If the author paid a little more attention to his audience and took into account when many people point out the same problems in the fic he would be the perfect author, since many of these problems can be solved in the next chapters.
ScarletQC:What did he do?
PsyLoRD:he also did some ntr in other fics like the witcher one
are you serious? it was not a one-time thing, Ciri was raped by his other girls a few times, for example: that spider one from dark souls (I don't really remember if is from DS) but it happened a LOT.
MannyTheManticore:I don't remember there being any NTR in that one.
PsyLoRD:are you serious? it was not a one-time thing, Ciri was raped by his other girls a few times, for example: that spider one from dark souls (I don't really remember if is from DS) but it happened a LOT.
PsyLoRD:are you serious? it was not a one-time thing, Ciri was raped by his other girls a few times, for example: that spider one from dark souls (I don't really remember if is from DS) but it happened a LOT.
That’s sad. I wish you better luck in finding novels. I also don’t understand yuri where girls have romance with each other.
PsyLoRD:but it happened... unfortunately...
Nyxio:That’s sad. I wish you better luck in finding novels. I also don’t understand yuri where girls have romance with each other.image
I read your comment and checked the book and it's kind of different from what you say: quelaag (the spider woman from dark sous) was obsessed with MC but Ciri didn't accept him having other relationships so she (quelaag) gave she a love-potion (like the ones from the world of Harry Potter) for Ciri so that she accepts the three-way relationship and at a point in the story when she (quelaag) knows that the MC is coming she gets naked with Ciri and they both wait in bed for him in an attempt to seduce him (At this point there is a line talking about how she is trying to act that she was caught off guard even though her acting skills were bad) in the end they remove the effect of the potion but Quelaag continues with them although in a submissive position. at no other time does she(ciri) appear to have been forced into anything. and in this novel there were no other girls as romantic interests apart from these two(apart from a single night with fleur[from harry poter]) it took a lot of work to reread all the scenes involving ciri to understand the situation(used the google traslator maybe have errors of write )
PsyLoRD:are you serious? it was not a one-time thing, Ciri was raped by his other girls a few times, for example: that spider one from dark souls (I don't really remember if is from DS) but it happened a LOT.
It was way different, maybe the author changed (cause many people didn't like, just go and read the reviews and you will see that I'm right, that really happened) that novel is old asf.
Rico321:I read your comment and checked the book and it's kind of different from what you say: quelaag (the spider woman from dark sous) was obsessed with MC but Ciri didn't accept him having other relationships so she (quelaag) gave she a love-potion (like the ones from the world of Harry Potter) for Ciri so that she accepts the three-way relationship and at a point in the story when she (quelaag) knows that the MC is coming she gets naked with Ciri and they both wait in bed for him in an attempt to seduce him (At this point there is a line talking about how she is trying to act that she was caught off guard even though her acting skills were bad) in the end they remove the effect of the potion but Quelaag continues with them although in a submissive position. at no other time does she(ciri) appear to have been forced into anything. and in this novel there were no other girls as romantic interests apart from these two(apart from a single night with fleur[from harry poter]) it took a lot of work to reread all the scenes involving ciri to understand the situation(used the google traslator maybe have errors of write )
I remember that the author's excuse was smt like: That Ciri was his favorite character, cause of that he wanted her to be similar to the original (Lesbian/Bi) that's why he wrote a lot of scenes of Ciri with MC's girls (without the MC knowing or his consent) cause he wanted to be close the original...
Rico321:I read your comment and checked the book and it's kind of different from what you say: quelaag (the spider woman from dark sous) was obsessed with MC but Ciri didn't accept him having other relationships so she (quelaag) gave she a love-potion (like the ones from the world of Harry Potter) for Ciri so that she accepts the three-way relationship and at a point in the story when she (quelaag) knows that the MC is coming she gets naked with Ciri and they both wait in bed for him in an attempt to seduce him (At this point there is a line talking about how she is trying to act that she was caught off guard even though her acting skills were bad) in the end they remove the effect of the potion but Quelaag continues with them although in a submissive position. at no other time does she(ciri) appear to have been forced into anything. and in this novel there were no other girls as romantic interests apart from these two(apart from a single night with fleur[from harry poter]) it took a lot of work to reread all the scenes involving ciri to understand the situation(used the google traslator maybe have errors of write )
Nah he just had to kill EVERYONE just before it ended and I just didn’t like that like cmon why’d he have to do them like that???
RadicalHuman02:The very ending of it was actually solid. Everything leading up to it? Different topic 💀
RadicalHuman02:The very ending of it was actually solid. Everything leading up to it? Different topic 💀
he did not kill EVERYONE and think he took that route cause of the aliens in the series and he wanted to add them, that is a thing aliens would do most of the times especially in that kinda of world
Peryite:Nah he just had to kill EVERYONE just before it ended and I just didn’t like that like cmon why’d he have to do them like that???