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MangaisLife1
MangaisLife1Lv21yr
2023-12-08 22:46

Author/Dakhshay this is really good and enjoyable. It gave me Villain Play of Destiny vibes....I am really liking this and I am sure when more people come across this they will start to really appreciate how amazing this is. So far I did read 61 chapters but its so good I wanted to review This is just for author so if you dont want spoilers dont read? I wish you would focus on him helping the heroines grow. I did see how he wanted to teach Alicia the sword art when he thought about it that she probably used in the future but so far it hasnt been mentioned if he taught her that and she has been training for a while Also he did think about making his dad buy some dungeon but after he had a thought it wasnt mentioned again. I am assuming all these things or ways he can help his family grow he will actually use in the future since you mention him thinking but not doing it. That could be really good him building up his familys influence and business using things he knows as well. Also with Lily you mentioned her getting a organic body could be hard but hopefully he can reach a power level in future where it could easily be possibly for her to become a real being with human body Also I saw power levels you mentioned and he even said there are beings with even more power then that. If you have read cultivation novels you would get it but. I was hoping that this is lower world and usually when people get to a certain power level they can ascend to go to a higher world where beings who pursue true immortality or to become a god exist. There all of them could pursue true immortality With that he can have a long journey in this world and when he has reached the peak, helped the wife and heroines (harem) reach the peak of power, also his parents, then he could go to the higher world with them. There obviously they would not be the strongest so it starts another whole journey for him along with his family and people.

Conquering The Game's World

Dakshay
4.2
247 Chs

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Thanks for your review. I hope you continue to enjoy this story. The points you mentioned, I'll keep them in mind.

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