Review Detail of KamikazeDrew in ILLIMITABLE UNTIL DEATH

This story suffers from the same issue that a lot of Chinese stories with Japanese settings do, and that is the fact that they refer to everyone by their full names every time they are brought up. This is kind of annoying, especially because some names are kind of long, but they are still repeated in full more than once in a sentence. It also suffers from bad pacing. An example of this is that there is a whole chapter of explanations between the time the MC jumped out of some bushes to attack a monster to when he actually hit it and killed it. There are many times when an action scene is suddenly interrupted for poorly timed background information.