goid story just please do not drop this my heart cant take another dropped danmachi book

I mean it is not bad but too many oc characters ,like the mc joining an oc familia 💀💀💀 , oc characters are bland and have no depth , even in this fan fiction the oc characters are just out of place I can't like them as much as I like the original characters and this make it annoying to watch , and the mc is needed if you don't want op mc then don't give him a cracked wish that is just going to be nerfed

2.5/5 at best the blatant disregard for Danmachi's power system irks me to no end he's not a OPMC he's a Dragon-Kin with a jack of all trades skill and by chapter 9 or so he's already casting meteor without a Falna the inconsistencies just ruin the vibe of the fic hope it get's a rewrite at some point for consistencies sake if you wanted it to be an OP MC fic you should have said so from the beginning

The story is normal I guess.. I drop it because the mc is 20 years old and acts like a child which causes me a bit of frustration In addition, the author always says in the comments that he is going to explain about the dragons and why he acts like that but he never does bruh

Overall the story is pretty average even with the unique setting as it is set years prior to canon. The main issue i had was the execution, inconsistencies, certain choices and the mc. The MC didn't feel like a 23 year old person withpassion who was reincarnated. In Danmachi, he became kinda a generic isekai mc especially with the whole dragon race thing which was already pushing it. He kinda became boring with having little to no interesting aspects of his character especialy his personality. Also their are inconsistencies with his knowledge of danmachi especially important ones. Also the story tends to extend itself too much, making certain parts longer than necessary when it could have easily been shortened.It had a troubling start, a non-interesting mc and concepts that weren't really executed well.

keep it up 👍💯 more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter

Shameless Author here to give 5 stars lol. At least give it a try. Constructive criticism and suggestions are welcome.

So here's my brutally honest review as of Chapter 12, so do note things may have changed by the time you read this.(This is my opinion ONLY, so it's truly up to you if you like it or not): The Goods: - The update rate is impressive to say the least, I know how hard it is to write and as such it's amazing just how fast the chapters are being pumped out. - The wide use of OC's is something that I like, and it allows the fic to have it's own ground to stand on without focusing strictly on canon, bringing a sense of fresh air and potential for original arcs, this in addition to the MC arriving before canon. The only worry I have is that it'll be too much OC's to keep track of, and as such most would be 1 dimensional and have robotic personalities. -The bloody dragonkin MC of course. - The including of a childhood arc for an isekai MC. Some may not like it and would like to jump straight into canon, but that wouldn't make sense in my opinion. So the childhood arc was pretty nice and executed at an OK level. The Bads: -I'm not sure they're related, but the authors rate of releasing chapters comes with the consequence of writing quality. Frequent incorrect grammar, missed and incomplete sentences/words, the works. I'm not one to talk, but I think if the chapters are given more time for polish instead of being pumped out as fast as possible (I'm guessing here), that'd be great and it'll make the story much better and more readable/professional! Conclusion: I greatly recommend the story, it has potential and if the author improves as he writes whilst taking delicate care of the MC from steamrolling mindlessly the entire story, it'll be amazing. Writing Quality: 3/5 Update Stability: 5/5 Story Development: 5/5 (Not long enough to get an accurate score but 5 for now) Character Design: 5/5 World Background: 5/5 Thank you for the fic and wish you good luck Author!

I rarely leave reviews, but this story, while not perfect, is still one of the best danmachi story I have read. While some people hate the mc because he doesn’t “act this age”, here you can witness a human being adapting to his environment and genuinely being changed by his surroundings. While this story would have been better if the character wasn’t reincarnated in the first place, or if he didn’t keep his memories. It is still appear to have the makings of a good story with actually character growth, a plot with actual challenges and characters that aren’t cardboard cutouts.