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Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv11yr
2023-07-18 22:28

I'm not going to talk about the novel because this is a translation but there are things to fix, first, there are verbs that are not conjugated, commas are missing, there are also nouns in Chinese, I know some are oc but you could take the liberty of changing them to nouns Japanese, on the contrary, there are completely translated things, like the 7 swords or the tsukuyomi, which is that of the "Distinguished Heavenly Gods", secondly, these are more personal but Mr. Translator, if it weren't too much trouble, I could change some dialogues so that They seem more Western and not Chinese, that is, not what you say but how you say it, that would be greatly appreciated.

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Its the Typical Chinese MC and plot where the world revolves around them and just fall into place. If you have nothing else to read, its a good novel to waste time you might cringe and complain alot but its still readable. Translation is below average the names of the skills are machine translated but the names so far are correct. The sentence construction is bad. Most of the Naruto characters personalities have been twisted to fit the plot so it would the mc's little world. The romance aspect is the typical trash webnovel formula, there is ZERO romance just alot of blushing and BS etc. The fight's are ok tho, so there is that going for it. Alot of the major characters have been dumb down to fit the mc's level. Alot of negatives in this novel but still a good read if you have nothing else to read.

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I can't understand why people would give 5 stars ? I knew it would be bad, but this bad ? At this point u can just post the raws. Calling persons it and whole Paragraphs that are not understandable. No effort at all just copy and paste with the help of an online translator. Without any editing at all. And u still want to earn money with that ? This is just shameless.

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Jer_Miller
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It's extremely good so far. the quality of the translation is extremely good compared with the ones I have tried to read. Please keep up the good work.

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Interesting, I hope this novel will continue and not stop halfway. If possible, please update more. A little advice, please focus on updates, don't mind the mocking comments. As this novel goes on, I'm sure it will reap a lot of positive comments

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I have not read it but it sounds interesting so I will keep it in my library. 4 stars for the translation and the time you put into it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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My brain right now after reading this fanfiction🤡👍

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it isn't readable. it is mtl translation. don't bother .

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Okay I am going to be brutally honest here it’s not good but it isn’t that bad I believe if this story had better translation then this would be one of the best naruto fanfics I’ve read it’ll be a 5 star story. CHEF KISS if that would be possible.

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