The protagonist is somewhat flat, his backstory and hardships are not reletable or apparent, he lacks personality and unique qualities or traits. He doesn't have something interesting about him, no unique abilities, He doesn't train apart from running, he doesn't learn anything, he doesn't use schemes. His thoughts are intelligent but some are repeated and don't really portray him as mature. The dialog is decent but it only shows that he wants to hide and stay low. The story is fine, but other fanfictions are better executed, and there's hardly any interesting development in a dozen chapters. Overall its decent.

this fanfic is very questionable and the plot is seems force

nothing special, a clichéd main character from a bad naruto story, stupid trying to say that they are intelligent, and incorreace from one chapter to another, especially on the character, he says careful what he does? He bumps into a classmate, why because he followed her (reason he could have said that the MCs are strong, a chapter before he was close to rising this force).

Story is kind of extreme! As a kid, the mc killed his classmate in cold blood. This doesn’t really make any sense because people already knew he was training and would not have been a huge deal if others figured it out

Pure and hard "Plot Armor"... The plot is forced a lot to make things easier for the Mc (When he already has them easy), in a very illogical way, boring the reading due to the lack of difficult (It's like playing in peaceful mode and activating the creative)... #TeamReverendInsanity

Absolutely awful, strong is nonsensical and not in a fun way and the mc is deranged but also not in a fun way, let's start with.writing quality- the quality is readable but often sentences repeat or are extremely stilted and out of character, I got through a few chapters and again it's readable but that is not anywhere near the standard that should be set.Story- it starts off interesting but tacky and after a few chapters take a major nose dive (spoilers if you still plan on reading) ..... the mc trys to avoid attention by cutting personal ties and hiding in the background, yet when another kid threatens to reveal that he's been heading to the forest to train if he doesn't fight, the mc leads him on a chase into a deep forest and kills him, it is so abrupt and out of nowhere for the mc that it caught me so off guard I had to take a second to think about what I just read, the mc has actively tried to seem so unimportant to the world around him but suddenly decides murder was the best way to hide a 'secret' that he stated was most likely known by the hokage, and what was this secret training? he would spend the night jogging and swimming... stupid.character design- not only is the mc an out of nowhere psycho but his personality flip flops from being disinterested, to scheming to even concerned with someone he has purposefully distanced himself from, the other characters are out of character but I could let some of that slide, such as kushina isn't abrasive or passive agressive, but instead soft and determined to help the 'autistic' main character. at times its bearable but not worth sticking with after everything else.updating stability- can't say much as I had to drop after a few chapters.world background- the world is just a cliché cynical konoha that takes advantage of the weak, and with the mc changing the plot within the third or fourth chapter thing are almost guaranteed to be different, but who knows the author has show that he's more than willing to flip flop on his story so anything could change.all in all if you want to read this just know that the story most likely gets worse from where I stopped, if it doesn't then congrats on sticking through just don't get your hopes up.

this book is very boring it just focuses on the characters thoughts then story development

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