Okay, so far the story is just Okay. It has way too much unnecessary information. So expect a lot of chapters for no real reason. Because the stuff in those chapters could have been summarised into 1 chapter and it would have felt the same. Now, it's a bit weird that the MC is always in the chapters but he feels like he doesn't exist. Or should I say, it feels like he doesn't exist for anyone but Tony and Pepper. Becuase he as a character is relatively ignored by everyone else. He makes Baymax and everyone just acts like it's normal. There is no overall shock by the people around him. It's almost like "Oh, cool! A futuristic robot that can heal you! And it was made by a 14 year old kid! Anyways, so what are you doing Tony?". Even what I just said feels like more of a reaction then the people gave in the story. Because of that it just feels like the MC is a background character while Tony is the main character. The Author seems to be wanting to push the MCU story forward but by doing so the MC's story in this fanfic is suffering. Now, I am only 44 ish chapters in, and I will continue to read it. But so far it is a 3.5-star story. Nothing more, and nothing less. I would only recommend it if you have no other stories to read.
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