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2023-10-26 19:28

Got to chapter 108 before dropping it. Honestly well translated especially with the fact that this translator is posting multiple and probably doesn’t have much time to proof read everything. [SPOILERS BELOW] Mark is a decently well written character with a clear background that explains his obsessive love for money and his intellect is proven numerous times as he creates new inventions. Sadly that’s where my praise for the story ends. The original author refuses to divert from canon even once. He continuously makes Mark and Tony “stronger” just for the same canon events to happen because the author can’t seem to create their own plot. I finally dropped the story at 108 because Mark had just quite literally nuked a small town to defeat The Destroyer; just for it to do no damage and have to instead be defeated by Thor’s return to might.

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