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Review Detail of Parz5 in I Own a Funeral Home: Live Stream Following Other Streamers and Shock the Entire Internet!

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Honestly the overwhelming bafoonery of the MC takes away from the story. It has plot armor written all over it. The MC just so happens to be completely oblivious to some things that should be very important and seems like he’s not an MC, he’s just an NPC that the story happens around. It’s getting frustrating that he’s such a dimwit. I don’t want to read stories about complete a imbecile who manages to create story points through sheer incompetence and/or negligence. Story beats shouldn’t be based on the MCs miraculous ability to be completely oblivious to seemingly very important points of interest that anyone with a shred of common sense and semi-competent decision making skills would notice and act on.

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I Own a Funeral Home: Live Stream Following Other Streamers and Shock the Entire Internet!

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