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Parz51mthCommentedCh 57 57.- Parz52mthCommentedCh 190 Similar Flowers (1)detailMax-Level Learning Ability: Facing The Cliff And Repenting For 80 YearsEastern · Girl In Short Skirt
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Overwhelming bafoonery by the MC. Once again setting a story beat that should be completely avoided. This is frustrating. This is literally weaponized incompetence.
Unfortunately, he completely overlooked the note, and as he opened the door, it flew away with the wind.detailI Own a Funeral Home: Live Stream Following Other Streamers and Shock the Entire Internet!Urban · Gemini Sheep - Parz53mthPosted
Honestly the overwhelming bafoonery of the MC takes away from the story. It has plot armor written all over it. The MC just so happens to be completely oblivious to some things that should be very important and seems like he’s not an MC, he’s just an NPC that the story happens around. It’s getting frustrating that he’s such a dimwit. I don’t want to read stories about complete a imbecile who manages to create story points through sheer incompetence and/or negligence. Story beats shouldn’t be based on the MCs miraculous ability to be completely oblivious to seemingly very important points of interest that anyone with a shred of common sense and semi-competent decision making skills would notice and act on.
detailI Own a Funeral Home: Live Stream Following Other Streamers and Shock the Entire Internet!Urban · Gemini Sheep - Parz53mthCommented
Honestly the overwhelming bafoonery of the MC takes away from the story. It has plot armor written all over it. The MC just so happens to be completely oblivious to some things that should be very important and seems like he’s not an MC, he’s just an NPC that life happens around. It’s getting frustrating that he’s such a dimwit. I don’t want to read stories about complete a imbecile who manages to create story points through sheer incompetence and/or negligence.
Ch 69 Sister Zhou, You Can Warm Brother Dao's Bed.detailI Own a Funeral Home: Live Stream Following Other Streamers and Shock the Entire Internet!Urban · Gemini Sheep - Parz55mthCommentedCh 31 31.
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Is his name Dark Wine God or The Deunkard?? Please pick one and stick with it. This naming issue and the pronoun issue are confusing af.
"I've never heard of this new player, the Drunkard. Boss, I think this person probably doesn't have any backing and just happened to encounter some opportunities to suddenly level up so much," said one of Alexander's subordinates. - Parz59mthCommented
Wait, didn’t one gold coin equal $500? So 100,500 gold coins would equal $50,250,000… surely the author meant $100,500…
The price of the herb had risen to 100,000 gold coins, and in the end, the chubby guy got it for 100,500 gold coins. He seemed relieved to have finally gotten it. - Parz59mthCommented
Man, the continuity of this story seems to get out of wack a lot. Some of it seems deliberate, but other instances seem like errors.
"You have a regular auction in two days, right? I can bring out one hundred bottles then," Leo said, "I have over four hundred more after that..." - Parz59mthCommented
What a Chad.
Leo turned around and sneered, "I'm not interested in someone with such an ordinary appearance like you."