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2023-09-27 23:57

I just read the novel in one sitting. And the truth is that it is very confusing. I don't know if I'm the only one who feels this way. An example would be time. At one point they were in the long night that was supposed to last years and so on and everything was fine until then. But out of nowhere it jumped to the Andal invasion in a time that I imagine was 50 or 60 years taking into account that those who ruled were the grandchildren of the first houses. Which is very incoherent considering that according to the series and the books, the long night happened between 2 and 3 thousand years before the Andals arrived. Another point would be the Lanisters. I don't know if I'm wrong here, but they didn't participate in the long night and if I remember correctly they were Andalus. I think that if the author develops the story more instead of simply passing everything by as quickly as if time did not exist, it would be a great novel, but until the historical accuracies are corrected or the timeline made sense, it will continue to be just as confusing. Aaaah something else would be the valiryos. Who are supposed to have emerged about 2 thousand years before the conquest but here they appear as if nothing had happened. As I say, there are many historical inconsistencies that make the novel confusing.

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The main character creates the world, so you don't have to pay attention to the time frame. Because it automatically becomes AU

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