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Corey_Hall_0942
Corey_Hall_0942Lv41yr
2023-05-24 02:36

i usually love all of your novels I still do congratulations on making another w fanfic

World creator system

Just_for_fun1997
4.4
126 Chs

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Blackstarbor
BlackstarborLv2

I just read the novel in one sitting. And the truth is that it is very confusing. I don't know if I'm the only one who feels this way. An example would be time. At one point they were in the long night that was supposed to last years and so on and everything was fine until then. But out of nowhere it jumped to the Andal invasion in a time that I imagine was 50 or 60 years taking into account that those who ruled were the grandchildren of the first houses. Which is very incoherent considering that according to the series and the books, the long night happened between 2 and 3 thousand years before the Andals arrived. Another point would be the Lanisters. I don't know if I'm wrong here, but they didn't participate in the long night and if I remember correctly they were Andalus. I think that if the author develops the story more instead of simply passing everything by as quickly as if time did not exist, it would be a great novel, but until the historical accuracies are corrected or the timeline made sense, it will continue to be just as confusing. Aaaah something else would be the valiryos. Who are supposed to have emerged about 2 thousand years before the conquest but here they appear as if nothing had happened. As I say, there are many historical inconsistencies that make the novel confusing.

1yr

Kyle_Hadrian_Stark
Kyle_Hadrian_StarkLv14

This is now one of my favorites. please keep up the good work

1yr
LastGod
LastGodLv5

Had high hopes. But like many bad OP MC stories. This author fell into the trap of just creating a list of things the MC has done is doing or will do. Very few very short character interactions. Almost zero meaningful relationships. even wheb it seems he might start actually interacting with other people in some meaningful way. He goes back to listing things again.

1yr
Fuckyall
FuckyallLv14

This look like a good idea. I hope you won't drop this fanfic.

1yr
BrookeCandy
BrookeCandyLv3

This story have potential. Please don’t drop it.

1yr
Finnish_man
Finnish_manLv4

Its very good tho still very sad about the fact that the prologe thingy was so intersting sounding and was the reason i forst started to read cus i expwcted it to start from the begening and be a weak to strong feic and a lot of kingdombuilding its very sad but still pretty good

1yr
Baldurrr
BaldurrrLv4

The idea behind this story is pretty good, but unfortunately the grammar in it could use a lot of help and the background of the character was very vague with no story telling of it at all

1yr
Lavender_45
Lavender_45Lv2

The various errors made by the authors please check or have some to proof read your work , in any case it still interesting -savannah was omitted when it should be yavannah

1yr
FrostFries
FrostFriesLv4

I love the story and hope for more chapters like 300-500 chapter hope is not difficult for you

1yr
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