Really good start! The origin story for Tian Wei in the first chapter is fast-paced and action-packed with good imagery. It really drew me in. When Xaun Yi meets Tian Wei for the first time, I had a good chuckle! I really appreciate the pacing. The introduction of the other characters over the next couple of chapters is done well. What I like the most is that there's no over-burdening info drop, you come to understand the situation and the characters in a much more natural way which doesn't take you out of the movement of the story. Good writing!

Look, the beginning is good but the author gets lost much later and becomes the mc in a person who is being persecuted by any clan that uses the same martial art as him, a pity that in the end it seems that the story will become a typical cliché,this story would be better if in that part there where servant Xuan y tried to fight zao he let him take the hit and save him afterwards and the mc didn't take care of him too much. Other than that the story is pretty good. I really liked it, I just think it could be a little better but that's ok , it's just me complaining I really loved the story author thank you so much for the chapter keep it up Don't give up on your dreams [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]