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Constellation_soraLv151yr
2023-05-28 01:16

So far I like the story, has potential to be good. Only thing I hope is added is that the mc shows more human emotions and good interactions with other characters. And hopefully he doesn’t go emo and start to use others and avoid human interaction( I’m tired of emo villain mcs💀)

The Extra's Weight.

Xeanos
4.5
60 Chs

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Xeanos
XeanosAuthor

Thanks for the highly rated review! and about the MC, yeah I'll definitely not make him emo like that. Samuel is a Stoic. He always maintains his rationality even when situations look dire. If you're curious about what a Stoic is, then look it up on google.

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Xeanos
XeanosAuthor

I am writing this novel to improve my inglis writing skills. Thank you for reading this garbage. I hope you will leave an honest review, or a dishonest one, i can't really control what you do. anyways, thanks for reading

1yr

Ygreat
YgreatLv13

don't know what to say, but I hope it's updated consistently................................. .................................................. ............................................

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_J_
_J_Lv4

GRAVITY MAGIC IS VERY NICE U CAN USE ABILITIES OF PAIN FROM NARUTO OR THE ADMIRAL WHO USES GRAVITY FROM ONE PIECE AS WELL AND GRAVITY TO TRAIN THE BODY ENDLESS POSSIBILITIES THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER AND PLEASE DON'T DROP IT AND WOULD LOVE MORE UPDATES THANK U 🙏

1yr
Sweepers
SweepersLv13

I like it. And tbh it’s really good, we just don’t have enough information on the world building. I can see where you got some inspiration from other novels like the novel extra. But overall it’s good and the the characters have depth and real problems.

1yr
_J_
_J_Lv4

BROOOOOOO PLZ DON'T DROP 😭😭😭😭😭 I WANT 1000 MORE CHAPTERS ONLY

1yr
FunCat
FunCatLv4

promising story🧐 I read through the chapters in one sitting✌️ it has ciliche moments and also unique and sweet moments and I really like Evangeline she is so cute 😍 I hope you continue writing the story😏 ...good luck

1yr
mo_86
mo_86Lv13

The Story isnt anything new, however the author still does a really good job in comparison to other novels. The pace of Development of Characters and Story is ok and I like the character design and love that the mc sometimes shows a realistic, vulnerable sight of himself.

1yr
3ddy
3ddyLv4

author ik this book is for you to practice your skills but i hope you don't drop it and you continue until the end, also i will try to critique in chapters but I'm no expert also I'm reading this cuz it has a romance tag so i will wait for the fml

1yr
Celestial_Judge_
Celestial_Judge_Lv14

It's Good Readable Little bit like Copy but only one or two Thing but other than its Good

1yr
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