Review Detail of Powwll in Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)

Writing quality is good Stability not so good, Story 0 theres no story development Character design , urgh world background, ( the wolrd is his house and school ) First , its not that is bad fic, just the mc personalitie its a trash , some fics its a adult on a child body , in this novel is a child on a adult body, the system its there only to justify the power up , the mc doesnt get strong , all fights ( even raynare ) he barely win ( still win but urgh ) 90 % of the fic theres no human interaction , its just him in his thoughts theres more problems but in resume, the idea was good, but the mc fked everything, ( Theres alot fics with good idea but with a idiot mc , even famous novels like , Naruto , Bleach , Hary potter etc) <--- My opnion for good wolrd with a lot hitory , but a fked mc