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Warning: The story is homophobic. i don't know if those are the views of the author or not but the MC kills homosexuals because he thinks they are deviants. I was actually interested in the story at first but this just destroyed the while story.

Homophobic author… creates a lgbt city just to have the protagonist destroy it because it’s “heretic”. Bad flow for the story, it’s quite hard to read as every sentence feels disconnected with everything else…

I’ll say this first dropped this at chapter 10 cause I didn’t look and see it was multiple worlds I don’t like that but it gets a one star cause the author is unnecessarily homophobic instead just not including it he goes out of his way to kill a city full of them and call them worse than animals(humans are animals) and while I’m not gay I don’t want to read a story that express extreme hate towards a group of people

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5 stars for the homophobia. Good work author

I‘m just giving 1* for the obvious homophobia but even when u skim over that part the novel isnt that good. There are often grammer or logic errors like a man stabbing a child in the stomach which you would have to lean down for. Him helping a girl get sold into slavery being moral and also the part where he says that a day and a night equate to 24hours, 1440 minutes and 86400 seconds are errors that could be fixed by prof reading at least once or writing the novel in your first language. Then theres also this weird American hate in the first chapter idk why seems a bit unnecessary tbh i dont like joe bidon but saying a whole country is flawed is pretty extreme. Over all if u are like hohophobe or can gloss over chapter 8 and the obvious writing mistakes go for it.

something new, thank you author for the new book, looking forward to reading this Book.