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Innovation_Inu
Innovation_InuLv131yr
2023-06-06 20:26

I feel like I am seeing actual royal affairs in play. This has so much understanding of the life of a princess and arranged marriages. It has a touch of court drama but not too much it feels cliché. Just the right amount. The romance setting is mildly enjoyable and thrilling to read.[img=recommend] One issue though author//: If you remove the paragraph signs from none conversation lines it would make the work much easier to read in the first chapters. All in all. I want more.[img=update]

Rules and roses

mahe_ale_aba
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19 Chs

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mahe_ale_aba
mahe_ale_abaAuthor

thank you so much for these kind words i really appreciate your review. and it motivates me more sure i will update the first few chapters

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A very good read! I loovve the characters and their interactions! It;s so swweett and lovely and charming. I really enjoy reading about them

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The combination of a captivating story, memorable characters, and breathtaking prose sets this book apart as a must-read for any lover of literature.

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THE_GOAT_HIMSELF
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This is a very good read the title really represents how good this book is the character is amazing and being able to watch them interact is a spectacle

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Chase_Xavier_123
Chase_Xavier_123Lv3

I will update my reviews once the chater count goes up. Writing Quality - Currently it's lacking but since author is new it's fine to experiment. Keep in mind your first book is going to be worst but you don't stop writing. Cause next attempt is going to be even better than this. Story Development - I can't say clearly it gives the feel of fast pace with the quick rejection and the ball coming up. Character Design - I kinda like Mc but i hope author don't goes with the troupe 'she is not like other girls she rides horses, or she has brown hair hazel nut eyes her hair put in a bun without efforts but she looked stunning. At the same time she compliments about her looks. to her it felt people didn't respect her for who she was but only looked at her face.' Her dad kinda gets a warning from me. Let your daughter have a choice. (Quite hypocritical of me i know.) and i want him to have an intro bro got done bad. I know he is a side character but he is her father give him some paragraph. The nanny 5 stars Updating Stability - Take your time 😁 Quality over quantity. World background - It seemed to be historic with royalty but i can't tell the time period. I am sure it's going to be a good novel. Keep up the good work author. Don't be demotivated by anything.

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LordShivaStories
LordShivaStoriesLv3

Can't exactly judge because it only has one chapter though the premise seems very interesting also, I will provide a helpful advice pls give quotation marks since it will help readers to differentiate between quotes and narrative. Hoping to see more

1yr
BongoHead
BongoHeadLv11

waiting for next chapters, so far Going good

1yr
Jackie_Minton
Jackie_MintonLv13

Gorgeous story line! Royalty love is my absolute weakness! Keep up the great work!

1yr
ViciousPepper
ViciousPepperLv4

A great read, the author's writing is clear and concise allowing the readers to immerse inside the story. The descriptions are vivid and the main character Zhong Peng is very relatable. Overall, a promising novel with great potential...

1yr
_Orange_
_Orange_Lv13

Now that there are more than 5 eps let's review; - First; There's improvement as compared to before. -Second; The sentence structure is not in flow making it hard for readers, there's alot of mistakes as well. -Third; Its Readable but there's no wow factor. -Fourth; Story is quite unique but because there no wow factor that's why reader won't stick to it. Hope u carry on, it's always hard for new Authors. Try to make the sentence better. All the best.

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DaoistkWb8IC
DaoistkWb8ICLv2

Brautifully written good job keep it up

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