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2024-02-15 21:58

Waiting for the continuation. I really liked how the author presented the story. I also love how the characters really develop over the course of the story. It feels like the conflict that is presented and shown is really presented well, not just a template. The characters' feelings of anxiety, confusion, and how frustrated they are are explained well. And the most pleasant thing is that the face of the story is really stable. I just hope the author stays healthy so he can continue this story ❤️

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Thank you very much for your review and compliments ❤. Honestly, I had stopped uploading new chapters here due to lack of response from readers and it made me feel quiet discouraged so I started writing it on Wattpad. You can read further chapters there but I will also upload it here from now on, so it's up to you where ever you want to read it :)

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