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GMSJakersLv11yr
2023-07-15 01:33

This is a very good book with very good writing. I do have to say, the story is very captivating and interesting to read, and to discover all the things that happen.

The System's Martial World

Qilinblood
4.6
136 Chs

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alu_sachi
alu_sachiLv12

This work!This is what we define as good writing skills. I have read many books but compared to this one, those books are a pile of trash. The author is really talented I even thought that it was not really a human being who had written this work. The content is just otherworldly and captivating.Great, great work

1yr

femme_fatale
femme_fataleLv1

Your writing is very beautiful author. The words are beautifully woven into sentences. And the pacing of the story s perfect. It's a normal and slice-of-life genre so I really liked reading it! Keep it up!

1yr
Immortal_Dao01
Immortal_Dao01Lv1

Good story I am enjoying it very much, the author has made developments in his writing style in comparison to the Chapters in the beginning. So, I'll just say that it would be better for the other readers to read it till last it gets fun

1yr
IvanelaSalove
IvanelaSaloveLv11

This novel deserves a 5-star rating! I've read the first chapters, and it didn't fail to amuse me. I will still read more, but the author deserves praise for writing a remarkable novel. The scenes are smooth, and I had no trouble understanding it. Good job!

1yr
redlady
redladyLv1

I don't really like system novels but this one got my hooked ! I like the characters and the plot ! Keep up !

1yr
ForerunnerOfSky
ForerunnerOfSkyLv3

Let me just say I’m a huge action fan, so I was a little disappointed that there wasn’t any action the first few chapters. But it was worth it I read quite a few chapters, but one thing I loved more then anything is that literally every chapter is better than the last, you can see the author improve as the story progresses. I might actually add this to my collections and come back in a few weeks when theres more chapters so I can binge read. Only thing that I find fault in is the sometimes corny dialogue which sometimes ruins the flow of reading but other than that it’s pretty good

1yr
CADMUS
CADMUSLv11

To be honest, I'm not a fan of stories with systems but since I do like martial arts novels, I decided to give this a try. I'm glad I did cause when I started reading the first 3 chapters, I got so hooked that I didn't even noticed I've already reached the latest chapter 😅 and it's c42 (I'm shocked myself). It just goes to show how good this story is 🤩 Although, I have a question author...why is there no synopsis? or is it just not showing on my side?

1yr
DemonicSword9
DemonicSword9Lv1

this one is good, really easy to read, and the writing quality gets better as the novel progresses, keep it up author and update more frequently [img=recommend]

11mth
cody_dennis
cody_dennisLv1

I just started reading it and he made his wish and the schools immediately start teaching about how to sense the spiritual energy the first day with no research being done on it.

10mth
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