Item: The Golem Mage
Rating: 3.2
Author: Kimikyu

KimikyuLv111yr

2023-05-27 10:16

It's an interesting story, world, and magic. It's just the absolute lack of grammar, and many sentences make no sense. Also, the pay wall is way too early, especially for the quality and length of the chapters. The characters are decent, but half the time, you can't understand their intentions or emotions because of the poor writing.

The Golem Mage

mystic dark

3.4

701 Chs

Liked by 45 people

Replies3

Random_guy36Lv15

was trying to read the free chapters to decide if I wanted to actually pay for chapters. they end before readers can get a decent understanding of how the story will go, and the overall quality of the story up to that point is frankly bad. not sure how this ended up in the top 50 power rankings, and if it's past the pay wall I just can't find anything in what I read up to that point that makes me want to continue

1yr

Ameer_Yerima_lawalLv4

Yh the author have a good idea but the exe is terrible cution

Random_guy36:was trying to read the free chapters to decide if I wanted to actually pay for chapters. they end before readers can get a decent understanding of how the story will go, and the overall quality of the story up to that point is frankly bad. not sure how this ended up in the top 50 power rankings, and if it's past the pay wall I just can't find anything in what I read up to that point that makes me want to continue

1yr

Shibam_Pal_6898Lv4

Books more terrible than this are in the top 5, what's with it being top 50

Random_guy36:was trying to read the free chapters to decide if I wanted to actually pay for chapters. they end before readers can get a decent understanding of how the story will go, and the overall quality of the story up to that point is frankly bad. not sure how this ended up in the top 50 power rankings, and if it's past the pay wall I just can't find anything in what I read up to that point that makes me want to continue

1yr

Other Reviews

Haplo484Lv15

The story is interesting, but you hit a paywall way too quickly for how low quality the spelling and grammar is, and for how short the chapters are.

1yr

ReimossLv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr

DoubleCoNLv15

Great premise excited to see where it goes I’m a binge reader so I don’t usually continue after the free chapter until we get to 500 plus and then I read about every 500 or a 1000 chapter until complete I would highly recommend Grammerly! The free version, if you go back and put every chapter through it you should be able to fix a ton of critics opinions of the book❤️😇

1yr

poison_testerrrrr2Lv4

The story itself is okay, the only thing that is holding it back is the grammar. it's like mtl hahahaha

1yr

MattirroLv15

the story, characters, and world seem interesting. it's just difficult to see it under the mountain if grammatical mistakes.

1yr

HitThat007Lv14

Garbage grammer and spelling. pay wall way to early to really determine if it's worth the money no really world building

1yr

KingsCandidateLv14

This novel is honestly the biggest dumpster fire I’ve seen. The author spends no effort into proofreading or editing, has completely broken story lore by randomly changing his mind on key plot points or just simply forgetting and not bothering to try adding it in where it’s relevant. The system element is also really forced and unnatural because Author can’t decide on a stable IQ for MC. The only consistent thing about this novel is the amount of updates if you want to flush coins you’ve been warned. A few examples: - Every single chapter since ch 1 is an absolute mess of grammatical, punctual, and formatting errors that make it absolutely abysmal to read (I have read until ch 220) no hate if English isn’t your first language but with 500+ chapters out and multiple comments every chapter pointing it out you should start editing it - In ch 1 paragraph 2 MC states he has been reincarnated/transmigrated into his new body 14 years ago (story starts before his 15th birthday). Author then decides that instead at some point he transmigrated from where the story started and his memories from childhood are now jumbled and hazy since they “weren’t his” - MC starts to create different golems even upgrading some to elemental golems, Author decides to full pivot and MC’s GOLEM CREATING PATH has switched to making CYBORGS. Literal cyborgs, his spearman robot can apparently turn SPEAR QI into a PLASMA LAZER - MC acquires a DIVINE weapon (highest rank we’ve heard of) that is broken and requires the blood of SLAIN enemies to repair it, Author then has MC use a completely different blade for 90% of the time and even when he does use it no notification comes up from the system that announces anything happened

7mth

Gavin_LeporeLv3

The grammar is very bad. The story is OK though.

11mth

SaysMeLv15

Writing at the start is rough , really rough. Stuck through it as there are edits here and there that hint at better writing to come. What killed it for me though was the character progression. Just jumps all over thr place and really killed the enjoyment for me. I really wanted to like this book as the premise seems great but the execution really doesn’t make this worth reading. And certainly not worth using stones on.

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