Review Detail of MrYoungLogan in AFFECTION SYSTEM: CONQUER THE HEROINES

Author here. Here is my honest review. 1). Interactions: Well, the interactions are not that great. I know. But I will try to improve it soon. 2) Grammar: Hmm, the grammar sucks, okay. But I guess many of you can understand what I am trying to deliver to you guys. 3) Heroine nature: Yes, this is an important point. Most of the readers find Horikita's behaviour different from her usual self, and some of you maybe find the same with Shikimori and Komi. So, listen, I will not fully copy their personality as I will make some changes, okay? I think I have, maybe, answered some of your doubts. And don't worry, if you have any other doubts, ask me. I will try to answer it for you guys. BTW, THANKS FOR GIVING YOUR PRECIOUS TIME TO READ MY NOVEL...