Review Detail of Retro_ in Tokyo Revenger: Domination
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Loving it, But I would like to give you a few suggestions: 1. Use Grammarly for better grammar also please use commas and capitalize letter. 2. Harem would ruin this fic so no-harem would be better for anime like Tokyo Revengers. 3. Use scene breaker like '----' so that scenes are not clustered. 4. Don't make main character too op like being able to counter guns and such. 5. Since Tokyo Revengers relies on Time-Travel, and if you are planning on bringing Time Travel as well make sure you have solid plans for what happens to main character. Good luck author!!!
Tokyo Revenger: Domination
Novannovan
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DaoistOfTheAbyss:whos the love intrest? plz tell me i hate waiting to figure it out and then get disappointed if its not a charcter i like
thankyou so much for the info bro, i never thought there are a grammar app like that, about that harem thing we see later on, because i am a fan of harem so sorry for that😂,but i promise there will be not to many girls,maybe around 2-3 girls,yess i will use "---" for the next chapter,no i will not make mc to op,there will be reasanoble development don't worry with that,in the next chapter there will be a backstory about Mc so stay tuned for my next update🙌🏻🙌🏻
Novannovan:thankyou so much for the info bro, i never thought there are a grammar app like that, about that harem thing we see later on, because i am a fan of harem so sorry for that😂,but i promise there will be not to many girls,maybe around 2-3 girls,yess i will use "---" for the next chapter,no i will not make mc to op,there will be reasanoble development don't worry with that,in the next chapter there will be a backstory about Mc so stay tuned for my next update🙌🏻🙌🏻
Novannovan:thankyou so much for the info bro, i never thought there are a grammar app like that, about that harem thing we see later on, because i am a fan of harem so sorry for that😂,but i promise there will be not to many girls,maybe around 2-3 girls,yess i will use "---" for the next chapter,no i will not make mc to op,there will be reasanoble development don't worry with that,in the next chapter there will be a backstory about Mc so stay tuned for my next update🙌🏻🙌🏻
i decided to drop the harem thing and focus with one love interest after careful consideration😂😂Harem just doesn't fit well with this fic, thankyou for your support bro🙌🏻🙌🏻
Retro_:no problem for girl bro. You are doing great work
whos the love intrest? plz tell me i hate waiting to figure it out and then get disappointed if its not a charcter i like
Novannovan:i decided to drop the harem thing and focus with one love interest after careful consideration😂😂Harem just doesn't fit well with this fic, thankyou for your support bro🙌🏻🙌🏻