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Retro_

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Just a random person trying to write some novels. Check it out.

2020-10-01 JoinedGlobal
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  • Retro_
    Retro_4mth
    Posted

    Since this book is just beginning, I'm reviewing it So the plot is well Mc transmigrates as Matsuda! The story is readable I did see some grammar mistakes but no typos. Keep going mate!

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  • Retro_
    Retro_8mth
    Replied to as123

    One Piece is all about crews and friendship not Harem or Romance. Sure there are kingdoms and such but do you really think the female would love to be in a Harem and look at the title MARINE, you think WG will allow Mc to get a harem of PIRATES?

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    One piece: The Fist of Justice
    Anime & Comics · TrapcardD
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  • Retro_
    Retro_8mth
    Replied to Injustice

    I mean nah

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    Buggy D Clown
    Anime & Comics · Marioni
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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Replied to Tog_Python

    It will be but will take a little while

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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Replied to I_am_Baal

    i mean they HELPED fairy tail..you don't pay good with evil unless you a villian

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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Replied to Lyrical_Ivo

    nah bro if I drop it's either if I die or things like that

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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Replied to I_am_Baal

    I mean killing Vali is IDIOTIC

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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Posted

    The story itself is good...the plot is GOOD but the thing is it sucks ffgtyhyu uuy iu i yu i yui uyiuhiuhiuiiuriuruv hthhuijt

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    All Hokage in The Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · Marioni
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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Replied to Jesse_Huazo_0595

    yo ma**

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    Winds of Change DX
    Anime & Comics · Fictitiouz
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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Replied to Ballad

    Thanks mate

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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Replied to PriamustheBright

    I got no idea about what thug shaker means

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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Posted

    Very good fan-fic from the author. A no-harem fairy tail fan-fic so it's good. System ain't that op. Continue morea authorrrr. Really love how this is going on

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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Replied to The_Book

    based?

    "I know, I counted in Torchic in my original calculation. You're both women, therefore your opinion is worth barely half of what a man's is. Therefore 2v1, my statement stands." I remarked casually, knowing my played-up sexist comment would get me a newspaper roll smack to the head.
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    Livestreaming My Pokemon Journey!
    Anime & Comics · President_Poverty
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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Commented

    Author, May I give a humble suggestion?

    Ch 9 First Fight
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    Tokyo Revenger: Domination
    Anime & Comics · Novannovan
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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Commented

    This webnovel dawg, No warning necessary

    (A/N: Smoke is bad for your health!! and don't smoke if you're not yet 18+!!)
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    Tokyo Revenger: Domination
    Anime & Comics · Novannovan
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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Replied to Novannovan

    Just convert heavenly sin or wht you named the gang into japanese

    Ch 8 First System Task
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    Tokyo Revenger: Domination
    Anime & Comics · Novannovan
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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Commented

    Bro give the gang name a little bit more japanese feel...Like a better name

    Ch 8 First System Task
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    Tokyo Revenger: Domination
    Anime & Comics · Novannovan
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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Commented
    The blonde guy is Izaki Shun, a friend of mine from primary school. We used to play together. He is a wily and crafty person. He doesn't like to associate with people. You can say that he is a Lonewolf, as for how I can get to know him. It all started when I accidentally rescued him from a group of people that wanted to gang on him. At first, I didn't want to get involved, but when i noticed that the kids near him appear to be weaker than me. I decided to help him. My principle is, if it is in the range that i can afford, I will help. If it exceeds my ability, I will close one eye and open one eye.
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    Tokyo Revenger: Domination
    Anime & Comics · Novannovan
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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Commented
    As for the long black hair guy, his name is Urushibara Ryo. He is my childhood friend when i was recently moved out to the orphanage, his house, and the orphanage are not too far. We got to know each other after i helped him drive away the bunch of bullies who always bullied him.
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    Tokyo Revenger: Domination
    Anime & Comics · Novannovan
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  • Retro_
    Retro_9mth
    Commented

    Please nothing like master though

    "Of course Boss, you can count on us" Both Ryo and Izaki replied while bowing.
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    Tokyo Revenger: Domination
    Anime & Comics · Novannovan
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