Review Detail of MrCoconut in Issei's Redemption

While it wasn't irredeemable trash, the author butchers various characters and rewrites them in a way that takes away their initial charm. I get that it's a fan-fic and the Author can write what they want, but the mood swings that every character has just sucks. Not to mention, by "redeeming" Issei we lost Grayfia and Venelana. There's also the Kendo girls that throw themselves at Issei and he does nothing, as well as the Fallen Angel maids he captures and forgets for 80 chapters (that's when I dropped, maybe they made a comeback, IDGAF).