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Genesis_999
Genesis_999Lv21yr
2023-06-06 05:55

This is so trashy I read up to ch 54 the guy is contradictory hypocrite who changes issei time and time for his fe-tishes he a be-ta and {m} and it's funny how trash his brain is dragon arre prideful issei likes big bo obs like you said whining you lead him to self improve not changing him completely so why is he giving his v to sona? Seriously take your trash ear pulling Sona fe-tish elsewhere I get you like sona but aren't you being too much? You said you didn't change him and you were whining you won't change him so you know he likes big bo obs and this issei is trash he is so disgusting like he even acts kind and nicely to someone who was going to kill him just to get in their pants my god and even when riser arrived like lol he pats the girls head who were insulting him and were going to kiss riser Like What?

Issei's Redemption

some_writer
4.5

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IMDOOMED
IMDOOMEDLv14

Well, but I see no issue with that. I thought you would have a critique regarding his excessive ruthlessness towards his enemies and his hypocrisy, as that is what is truly revolting, not something else.

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Golden_Dragoon
Golden_DragoonLv2

I like it have a meme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

A waste of time transformed the. perverted into a slave fetish and the attitude of a young master. .

1yr
GreedyHuman
GreedyHumanLv11

Writing Quality: The writing quality is excellent with no noticeable mistakes. (5 stars) Story Development: The story has a lot of potential, but it falls short due to the main character, Issei. Issei's actions, particularly when he forcefully kisses soma, are problematic and resemble a form of assault. This significantly affects the rating. (3 stars) Character Design: Initially, I liked the main character, but his forced kiss on Sona is unacceptable to me, and he comes across as excessively edgy. (2 stars) World Background: The world background lacks sufficient details, which somewhat affects the rating. (3 stars) Updating: The fact that the story is free to read is a positive aspect. (5 stars) Evaluation: The story starts off promisingly, but the main character's behavior becomes increasingly ignorant and arrogant, relying solely on his overpowered system/powers. His brief redemption arc is short-lived, as he quickly reverts to his worst personality traits. Personally, I found this unappealing and chose to discontinue reading. (Not my cup of tea) Note to the author: I spent 15 minutes crafting this review, so please do not remove it simply because it may not align with your preferences.

1yr
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Hmm, so what the point making it's so close to original one? I mean, people could read original and find out that it's written better and actually smarter then this low-budget remake. So why would this exist? More girls? With him being even more reserved then original issei? What the point? Is this some meta joke or something? Don't know, see for yourself.

1yr
Bierbart
BierbartLv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Yo. Author-kun. Im glad you fine. and thanks for everything. I will support you.

1yr
Urion_Limitbreaker
Urion_LimitbreakerLv3

An excellent beginning for Issei in this story. With Gyastu's guidance, alongside the helpful system, mixing with Ddraig's sacred gear......I can see him becoming very powerful, mostly intelligent, and being a better person than he was in the original.

1yr
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Great AU of DXD.Issei is a Chad.Strong. Smart.Dominant. He is much better then Anime adaptation of Issei. This Issei in this story is much more closer to novel version.

1yr
timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1

Mc has no brain. There is no logic in the novel. The Mc mentality is garbage. It is a novel written for fun. but without the mc brain it's not much fun to read. hence the low score.

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