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Saune_Sunsword
Saune_SunswordLv151yr
2023-08-30 01:17

very well written, and engaging. The main character is relatively weak and small compared to those around her. I foresee her showing the society around her there is more than one path to power.

Knowledge and Power: Reborn into a society that only values strength.

Lions_Quill
4.8
353 Chs

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Lions_Quill
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The opening has now been fully released with lots of positive feedback. Thank you all so much for commenting, reviewing, and most of all just reading. I hope you all continue to follow my stories through the release.

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Grandmasters
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Wow! 😮 a very detailed narration and with emotions! I can see and feel what the MC struggles with. And I can very much like the premise. MC is hardworking and likable which gives touch to its craft. All in all, a good first pov! It will find success nonetheless [img=recommend]

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UelUel
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"...So fight like an insect...Fight even though you're just like a small ant biting at a Human skin...Struggle no matter how many times you get knock down...And when you can't stand up anymore, crawl in the ground not to run away but to face your enemy...Fight like an insect...Fight with everything you have...Even if you're small...Even if you're weak......Even if you're nothing, like a prideful insect that can be killed with a slam of a hand!!!...Show me how you struggle!...Show me a fight worthy of being like an insect!..." Great book! Good Job, Author! It's Another Story That Really Suits My Genre!

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SYED_ASAD
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Story is pretty interesting. The beginning kind of gave me a philosophical vibe. However, elaborate more on certain scenes so that it amplifies the atmosphere. Keep it up. Keep uploading 😀

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OldNispy
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Good job in writing and a lot of kudos for the effort to describe, well, everything. I think the characters are some nicely and as 3d as you can. Overall good read

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Scott_Crosswhite
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I've read Through this multiple times and their are a lot of things I like about it. It is a little bit dark, but its tagged as such so I cant complain. I feel like the passing is pretty good, and the general concept and characters are all established right away, so theirs no waiting around until chapter 5 for the story to really get started.

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redlady
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I am here for Siya ! She so sweet and smart even though she is relatively weak at the beginning .Either way the plot will be interesting having her as the MC and I am ready to see how her journey looks like .From weak to strong will always be a story that has real development. Good job author ! Writing , plot , description , character development ...chief's kiss !

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Saune_Sunsword
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well written and thought out characters. world building is believable. Definitely worth the read.

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The novel background, character, plot is preety interesting and unique. I relally loved reading this novel. I am so hooked into this novel. waiting for more chapters.

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