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2023-05-22 12:06

Wow! 😮 a very detailed narration and with emotions! I can see and feel what the MC struggles with. And I can very much like the premise. MC is hardworking and likable which gives touch to its craft. All in all, a good first pov! It will find success nonetheless [img=recommend]

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