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WhiteDeath16
WhiteDeath16Author7mthWhiteDeath16

Following the example of every author, I will be giving my story 5 stars. I would love any feedback you guys can give as this is my first real original novel. Also, feel free to ask any questions about the story here!

An Unordinary Extra

WhiteDeath16

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WhiteDeath16
WhiteDeath16AuthorWhiteDeath16

Too many people thought it was already heading in that direction even tho it wasn't so instead of editing the previous chapters to fit no harem I decided to change it.

Faier:why change it after so many chapters 😭😭
Kotik_Kotik
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can you make another attempt at a synopsis because currently you're just telling us that you did all the common cliches of the genre without showing how you're different and unique

WhiteDeath16
WhiteDeath16AuthorWhiteDeath16

Sure, I'll try to make it better. Thanks for your feedback!

Kotik_Kotik:can you make another attempt at a synopsis because currently you're just telling us that you did all the common cliches of the genre without showing how you're different and unique
_07_Jaiprakashp
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it's cliche but has its own uniqueness also to fully decide to support you should release more chapters and don't drop it because its nice.

Ashborn1609
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I saw that no-harem tag but I need to confirm. is it gonna be single fl or more than one girl for mc?

WhiteDeath16
WhiteDeath16AuthorWhiteDeath16

Only one in the end.

Ashborn1609:I saw that no-harem tag but I need to confirm. is it gonna be single fl or more than one girl for mc?
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

WhiteDeath16:Only one in the end.
ItzNeedless
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academy arc?

Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv13Hardy1j

Synopsis say Class A's So it should have the equivalent to schl in such novels, that is academy. Not sure tho

ItzNeedless:academy arc?
ItzNeedless
ItzNeedlessLv4ItzNeedless

Yeah, its academy. I read it already.

Hardy1j:Synopsis say Class A's So it should have the equivalent to schl in such novels, that is academy. Not sure tho
Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv13Hardy1j

Oh Alr Tq

ItzNeedless:Yeah, its academy. I read it already.
Ijekiel_Pendragon
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You have wonderful narrative skills. Thank you for writing🫰👌😗❤️

Faier
FaierLv14Faier

why change it after so many chapters 😭😭

WhiteDeath16:Only one in the end.
Faier
FaierLv14Faier

well thats unfortunate but you should announce it in my opinion at the end of one chapter for the readers that dont bear reading harem 😕

WhiteDeath16:Too many people thought it was already heading in that direction even tho it wasn't so instead of editing the previous chapters to fit no harem I decided to change it.
Faier
FaierLv14Faier

no more no harem brotha . it changed to harem

Ashborn1609:I saw that no-harem tag but I need to confirm. is it gonna be single fl or more than one girl for mc?
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4Ashborn1609

thanks again for saving me from wasting my time.🙂 now I can do better things like reading no-harem book .

Faier:no more no harem brotha . it changed to harem
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Faier
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Ashborn1609:thanks again for saving me from wasting my time.🙂 now I can do better things like reading no-harem book .
Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv13Hardy1j

Thanks! That saves me the time!

Faier:no more no harem brotha . it changed to harem
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